Young Writers Society

After Rose wakes up, Sloth is interrogated.

Minorly concerned about the based on a true story part, but let's go. Where I smiled: The writing style is immaculate, it showcases an almost dreamy terrain, giving a sense ...

William and Taury meet someone interesting

Hello there, Raven! I'm reviewing using the YWS S'more Method today! Shalt we commence with the possessed S’more? Top Graham Cracker - This is a haiku on characters from your ...

frantically googling "helmsman"

I tried posting my character designs on here but it didn’t work.

In which Charax meets a sukalla

Alright, let's cut to the chase. "April is taken with a grain of salt every year." It's like you've reached into the depths of memory and pulled out the raw, ...

Hii! First of all, I would like to compliment you on your amazing writing style, the way this story progresses and slowly draws you into itself almost like a siren ...

Blinking away the remants of a car in flames and waking to a room that still had the lights on, Shane focused a dead-eyed stare on the ceiling. Right. He'd ...

DAY 20 MORAL OF THE STORY, IT IS SIMPLY ME Moral of the story is simply just me. I am just a nobody. Love? What is it? Can the goddess ...

Before the Wave Breaks Welcome to Ruddlan. At the heart of Nye lies the city where all paths meet. Along the Axis River, the lifeblood of the Desert Sands, is ...

Hello, this is AkuRashomon and I am here to give you a review/comment. I love your avatar btw, is it your own art? Where am I? -- those are the ...

Hello Hello, I hope you dont mind me popping in with a quick review. Overall I really like the vibe of this poem it's quite striking. Plus I like how ...

Ley's Literary Laboratory This is the thread where I will be posting Literary Reviews of books I've read! In my lifetime, I've ready too many books where I can count, ...

Hello, friend! Let's get into it! Okay, to start, I'm SO SO sad that I didn't see this sooner! I'm a tad late ( a tad late being 3 whole ...