Young Writers Society

Heyo! So this looks like an extremely promising start! I have to say this right off the bat: I love your storytelling style. Maybe it's just the first chapter, but ...

Hi! What I really like about your work is that we have two poems in free verse. Both have a similar theme and leave a similar emotion in the reader, ...

Deinne is an adventure-seeking mechanic. However, something changes in her normal life: the treasure hunt in the steampunk universe begins!

Zuzu (from my story “Exploring the clown house in 1984”):

"Aren't there parts in those that you can't eat?" Mid asked Potash turned her head slowly and stared him directly in the eyes. "Everything is edible if you put your ...

Hello Again, My Friend! (sorry in advance, this is a much longer review than I anticipated XD) Oou, I've been eager to see where this leads ~ It's me, Raven, ...

Raphael and Trevelyan don’t believe in the stories of the clowns, there’s no such thing…isn’t that right?

What would you able to see here? Photos of cats that I took myself. As a person living in a household full of cats (even the neighbors have a lot ...

An excellent story, the continuation of which I would really like to hear :) . I like the touch of science fiction that can be felt from the story and ...

Hi! I liked your story - I like the humor with which you picked up the topic of punishments in hell. And the fact that people invented everything boring and ...

“She looked familiar to me, but I knew nothing by about her.” Starts with two people who don’t know each other. They become best friends and then grow apart :(

Hello there, human! I'm reviewing using the YWS S'more Method today! Shalt we commence with the mutated S’more? Top Graham Cracker - William, Taury, and his friends go to visit ...

Rose recovers at the guild

When I smiled: OK, to start out. I like how Thundur was just so tcked off that Kita was still needed. Her stubborn refusal to accept Kita's apology and other ...

I think I've come across my favorite story yet here on YWS! I like your storytelling style - it's fluent and sometimes a bit too simple, but full of little ...

#21 A Broken Machine Poetic Style - 5 - Visual/Found Inspiration - 3 - Song Theme Coin Flip - N/A - N/A Lyric: N/A A scientist, an actor could be ...