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(Blood) Trevelyan (ghost) (from my story “Exploring the clown house in 1984”):

"Aren't there parts in those that you can't eat?" Mid asked Potash turned her head slowly and stared him directly in the eyes. "Everything is edible if you put your ...

Hello Again, My Friend! (sorry in advance, this is a much longer review than I anticipated XD) Oou, I've been eager to see where this leads ~ It's me, Raven, ...

Raphael and Trevelyan don’t believe in the stories of the clowns, there’s no such thing…isn’t that right?

What would you able to see here? Photos of cats that I took myself. As a person living in a household full of cats (even the neighbors have a lot ...

An excellent story, the continuation of which I would really like to hear :) . I like the touch of science fiction that can be felt from the story and ...

Hi! I liked your story - I like the humor with which you picked up the topic of punishments in hell. And the fact that people invented everything boring and ...

“She looked familiar to me, but I knew nothing by about her.” Starts with two people who don’t know each other. They become best friends and then grow apart :(

Hello there, human! I'm reviewing using the YWS S'more Method today! Shalt we commence with the mutated S’more? Top Graham Cracker - William, Taury, and his friends go to visit ...

Rose recovers at the guild

When I smiled: OK, to start out. I like how Thundur was just so tcked off that Kita was still needed. Her stubborn refusal to accept Kita's apology and other ...

I think I've come across my favorite story yet here on YWS! I like your storytelling style - it's fluent and sometimes a bit too simple, but full of little ...

#21 A Broken Machine Poetic Style - 5 - Visual/Found Inspiration - 3 - Song Theme Coin Flip - N/A - N/A Lyric: N/A A scientist, an actor could be ...

Plastic and Factory Settings Today's Inspiration: Today’s song was Factories by Autoheart. I rolled Freeverse based on the song title. i am mass-produced in that i am easily broken under ...

I really enjoyed your story from beginning to end. I like how we see the narrator's view of Goe at the beginning - the descriptions of the scenery and the ...

Oh my, it's amazing! I love how smooth rhymes go. Also the working with theme you choosed is very well. It's cool how we through whole poem watch how their ...