My name is xena, you probably remember me from such hits shows as "Xena, Warrior Princess" starring me Xena, and from "Hercules, The Legendary Journies" starring Kevin Sorbo as Hercules.. and if anybody out there likes YWC points, i would recomendeding signing Xenas guesst book, and critisizing my work. Although i may scream at you if its negative. no lol jk! good luck. and god speed.
I'm not being unfriendly but I just wanted to agree with Sela Locke - try to keep all comments you make on stories clean! For stories and poems, you can use swearwords, but this is not the case with comments.
Also, try to be intelligible, everyone else manages it. I know it may be daunting but just recheck your reviews for grammar and spelling mistakes - then people will take you more seriously as they'll be able to understand what you're writing without having to squint.
Joined: 11 Apr 2008 Posts: 137 Country: A place where people aren't very smart.
Posted: Wed Jul 30, 2008 5:30 am Title: Xena
Just a quick tip? Next time you review, try being intelligible, or else it defeats the point of a review. Nobody wants a critique from someone who can't use punctuation, or just doesn't.
Xena. Thankyou for your "review". But I have to say that judging the idea isn't quite why I posted it here. I'm here for discussing grammatical issues.
Toilet paper and picture books HARDLY smell like eachother.
And lastly, smelling is a sense. Senses can create pictures in one's mind. Therefore, the scent of the picture book arouses the mind to create an image in the characters head of the "apocalypse".
Judging by your name, I'd assume you would identify closest with Rachel.
