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He sighed. He wanted to talk with Jessica. (OG!!!!) |
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| Posted: Sun Apr 27, 2008 1:47 am Post subject: |
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| ''Wheres tobi!!'' Jared shouted looking round the room for him. |
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| Posted: Sun Apr 27, 2008 1:48 am Post subject: |
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| "Shh keep it down."Maria wispered walking into the room |
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After waiting for a while I just sat in the corner tramatized by what I saw. Tobi's feelings for Mimi-I felt horrible. I couldn't breathe and I didn't really feel like living. Who knew after what happened to him who knew what was going to happen to me. I was starting to have premintions about his past and it even kinda hurt. So I just gave up. I was huddled into a corner and crying my eyes out. So much pain... |
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Tobi-
He relaxed in bed. Who knew what would happen in the future. |
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I felt as if something had caught in my throat-as if I was choking. The corner was my place. I couldn't cry anymore and slowly but surely fell asleep. |
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*THe end- for now*
Tobi-
Who knew what would happen next. What would happen to all of Jared's clan. Would Tobi find love again? Anly time would tell. |
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| *ha ha so what now? Should we start another day?* |
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| *Nope end of storybook Ill go start another one...* |
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and here begins another segment of the book. two new arrivals.
name: Wilhelm Haiza Kurtz --(actuall is Jacob Myers but adding book character for effect)
Age:20(115)--(14)
Race:European. Leader of the German Vamps yet still under the leader of
Europe, Serenity.
apperence: Tall, slender, a small build, bright gray/blond hair mixture, bright blue eyes.
history: Wilhelm (also referred to Will or William) was drafted into the army of Frederick Von Wilhelm II where he was shot and killed by a bolevik in the russian empire's former capital, St. Petersburg. He was fed the blood of an immortal and became a vampire. (basically the summary of the guy's part in my story)
name: sakura asuna
age: 18(201)
race: chinese vamp
apearence: black haire, red eyes, tall, long legs, extreemly small build (though she can still fight), pale skin
history: after seeing her parents murderd by german vamps, she suffered a fatal train wreck where she was brought up by the leader of the chinese vamps. she has been out to get the triad of the two murderers and the german leader. |
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