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PostPosted: Fri Apr 25, 2008 12:18 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Is it too late to join? If not, here's my character.


Name: Caz
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Weight: 165 pounds
Height: 6ft
Info: Republic Commando; has armor with similar patterns to Sev's but the color changes to match the surroundings. Has mental instablilty because his cloning pod fell off of the DNA rack. He is the only man in his squad currently because his was killed. Walon Vau is looking for replacements. He is also one of the best snipers of the Commandos.
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PostPosted: Thu May 01, 2008 5:56 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

hey imperial can i claim your guy? mines up for love soooo i thought it would be ok.

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PostPosted: Thu May 08, 2008 6:44 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

hey? what happened to the story? come on people!

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PostPosted: Thu May 08, 2008 7:52 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

**personally, im confused. Where and when is it set?**

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PostPosted: Thu May 08, 2008 9:04 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Currently the clones and the Jedi are headed to Geonosis for their first battle. The Baptism By Fire type of thing. Weed out the weak NCPs. Everyone else is either on geonoisis which who would want to live or visist there. Or they are about to hear abotu the Republic Ivasion force By HNE (Holo News Entertainment) its the main tv show in starwars and it never changes from the time of darth bane all the way to the end of the legacy of the force (Over 1000 years)

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PostPosted: Thu May 08, 2008 10:27 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I see. Personally, Cat I don't see what's so confusing. If you are a clone or Jedi, you're off to Geonosis to see how tough you are. If you're not, prepare to learn about the clone wars on galactic holo-vision!

Feel free Singer in the night...now we just have to meet. Unfortunately, I'm not gonna be doing much 'till after Geonosis. Woo. Hoo. How exciting.

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PostPosted: Sat May 10, 2008 12:10 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Blu:

Blue watched as Zall began his walk down the Long white hallway. It was like thay had never left Kamino. Blu decided that he wanted to talk to his brother about the simulation, but then thought he might want to start with Lever. So, with his destination in mind he began down the hall behind Zall until he reached the squads barracks. On his way in he almost walked into RC, Caz. "Sorry brother!" Blu said instantly "I didn't know you were there."

Caz turned looked over the other Commando with intrest. "RC-0245-95B, Blu.

"What is it with brother calling the others by the service tag lately?" Blu replid and motioned for the door.

Caz nodded and moved aside from the doorway he was accidentally blocking.

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PostPosted: Thu May 22, 2008 12:39 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

[Tyris]

Tyris was in one of the transportation vehicles from Kamino to Genosis, sitting with his squad. They all had to be on the alert, just in case. So Tyris stood with his snifer rifle jabbed into his ribcage, hand on the trigger. His muscles ached from standing, but he knew the squad leader was not in the mood for complaints. Probably because he has some of his own.

Just as Tyris was ready to jump out of his skin with impatience, the smooth white door slid open, allowing his squad to exit the vehicle. "Finally!" Tyris couldn't help but mutter.

His squad leader (who I haven't come up with a name for yet) reprimanded him with a sharp glare.

At that moment, a senior clone approached the incoming clones. Tyris prepared for a briefing.

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PostPosted: Thu May 22, 2008 12:53 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Blu:

Zeak and Lever hadn't talked or been togther since the simulation and now the four brothers were placeing thier helmets on. The first battle was already starting and the squad was in disarray from the actions of two members, Blu corrected himself, brothers. The door of thier LATT Gunship slide out of the way with a resounding thud. "Two minutes!" The pilot said into his comlink. The transport landed and offloaded two squads of Commandos.

"Why are we being infantry today, Lever?" Zeak asked

Lever didn't bother answering. He only waved his hand forward in the direction of the objective and sprinted to it.

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PostPosted: Thu May 22, 2008 6:49 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Caz sat in the LAAT seat next to other Commandos. They arrived a few days ago but stayed in orbit above Geonosis. His sniper rifle lay in his lap, primed and ready to fire at the slightest trigger pull. He was put into a squad a Commando known as Blu. They were Pod Brothers. They worked best together and everyone knew it. Even the Null-ARCS.

"Two minutes!" the pilot yelled over the intercoms. Caz was being dropped into the arena right along side Delta squad.

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