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The Broken -- TC -- Chapter Three
The Broken -- TC -- Chapter Three

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PostPosted: Thu Aug 21, 2008 2:35 am    Post subject: A Foggy Glass Chap. 4 Reply with quote

Sorry it took so long to finally bring this chapter into the light; I'm not just writing this story but also my band novel Keep it Cool still, as well as that fantasy novel of mine floating around here called Beyond the Doorway of Doom. And besides that, I'm at college deep in class as well.

Suffice to say, I'm busy as it gets right now and hardly get a chance to write; but I managed to finish this chapter yesterday, so here it is. This introduces the man known as Zerf, whom you heard about in chapter 3. This chapter also goes over Michael and his friend Mitch Cillian and their underground 'business'

Warning for the younger kids: This is rated PG-13 for a few strong curses, drug content, and some violence. I didn't think any of it was extreme enough to be R, but I could be wrong in my assumption; and if I am, then somebody inform me right away via PM. Thanks.

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