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PostPosted: Wed Aug 20, 2008 5:03 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I think Sarnom is an awesome name, personally. What do the rest of you think? And um...classssssesssssssssssss............................ummm, idk?
English?
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PostPosted: Fri Aug 22, 2008 1:20 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

I like Sarnom. I am going to be super blonde and obvious, but it sounds like Lord of the Rings! WEEEEEE!

Sorry for that small moment. Anyway, I like Elise's second suggestion about Erica and Kneph for finding spirit. What would spirit's color be? I also agree with the idea about Kaleb.

So... are the mentors ever going to not be considered stalkers? *tear* English sounds good, it gives Jaden and Sam another stalker class. I guess Elise would like that. Razz

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PostPosted: Fri Aug 22, 2008 2:17 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Pfft, you guys talk about me as if I'm dead or something. Though maybe for good reason.

Super sorry about my dead-ness in this storybook. I'm not even going to bother offering an excuse because there really isn't any. So I'll just apologize instead, and offer to get posting asap. I'll read over the whole storybook if I have to. And if I don't post soon, please, come pester me about it. Really. Send me horrific amounts of PM's and fill up my inbox to the brim, Email me, IM me. Do whatever you want. Seriously.

Ok! So, now I'm off to re-read the storybook and fill myself back in. And again, please don't hesitate to bug me about it either. I probably deserve it. I should post either on here again, or on the main thread by this time tomorrow. If I don't...bug me about it. ^.^

Sorry again!

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PostPosted: Sun Aug 24, 2008 5:07 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Yay yay yay! MAYBE"S BACK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Everybody cheer!

I'm so glad you're back, and it's perfectly ok. Honestly, I was probably gone longer than you anyway.

Your post was awesome, btw.

So, I guess all we have to find is....................................................Kaleb? Unless he's already been found and I missed it......

Oh, and yeah, English sounds great. Haven loves being a stalker. *Stalker. HEHEHEHE.*

lol.

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PostPosted: Sun Aug 24, 2008 9:31 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Sorry Maybe about the evil pm I sent you. It just feels really weird being the only mentor for that long. *cry*

Well, as the school year comes back... everybody comes back. YAY!

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PostPosted: Mon Aug 25, 2008 11:49 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Haha, I was beginning to think I'd done something horrible.

Well, school officially started for me today. So I can't promise how much I'll post, but at least as often as possible.

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PostPosted: Wed Aug 27, 2008 6:46 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Since we're getting REALLY close to finally trying to save the world (heh heh...) I think we should throw ideas around about getting there...and where we're gonna end up.

Didn't we disscuss reading a paper at the exact same time or something (yay randomly reading random pieces of paper outloud) I was actually (because i have NO life) thinking last night and thought this sounded okay:

Masters of earth, of water, of fire, of air
Masters of spirit, light, beasts, and darkness
We call thee forthwith to Eniyeth
To restore the peace that once dwelleth there


Something like that...or not. They would put a Post-it on it..."Read this Out loud... or else" (Sam's genious)

And Jade-okay-Jaden and I were discussing the portals. What if the portals were made of each of the person's element. (Ex: Erica-water, Haven-light, Dusty-fire etc) They would relive their worst memory and that element would 'become one' with them or something. That would be why they couldn't use their awesome-sauce elemental powers on good ol' earth. Then the unlocking thing-a-magig.

Just throwing some ideas around.

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PostPosted: Wed Aug 27, 2008 9:21 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I agree to all of the above. ^

But did we ever discuss what would happen after we arrived at Eniyeth and learned how to use our elements? Or am I just completely blanking out right now? I mean, are we gonna do the whole 'save-the-world' routine? If so, who is the bad guy(s)? Or are we doing something completely different?

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PostPosted: Thu Aug 28, 2008 2:06 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Firestar suggested that the bad guy be this evil king who has taken over Enyieth named Sarnom. Elise said something about having an entire trip once we get there filled with teen angst and drama, friendship and betrayal, and picking on Jaden and Sam. I agree with these ideas and Risa's.

I suggest that after Sam and Jaden explain the whole situation (like around a campfire on a beach or something) that we travel to some ruin and there the elementals get their gifts. And all the while Sarnom is trying to stop you all.

(Funny thought: you all land in Enyieth in feedle {sorry if I misspelled that} positions)

Then once you get the gifts we take a trip home or something (what about time? Will it freeze or be different like in Narnia or will the time be the same and everyone is worried because we've dissapeared.)

Then we come back and the elementals fight and somehow defeat Sarnom.

These are just ideas. I don't want it to seem like I am plotting the whole story. If you all like it... sweet. If not... okay.

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PostPosted: Thu Aug 28, 2008 5:44 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I think that the time should be the same and everyone thinks that Sam and Jaden have kidnapped them (lol).

Yay! People agree with me! Told you so Jade!

ANYwho, I like Jade's idea (it's easier to type than Jaden).

And i have yet another idea! We should get everyone else back! Jade's good at the annoying PMing thing, so I nominate Jaden for pulling everyone back.

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PostPosted: Tue Sep 09, 2008 11:24 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

hehehe...this'll be interesting...a date...hehe...

so now what do we do now that we found all of them? I'm assuming we're going to wait until tomorrow to go to Enyieth. I mean, a date? To much to pass up (giggles evily)

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PostPosted: Fri Sep 12, 2008 3:11 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

How are going to get to Enyieth in the first place? I'm sure that some of us would take a note saying to go somewhere at a certain time as a practical joke. I suggest that we get packages of some sort, and when we open them they teleport us to Enyieth.

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PostPosted: Sat Sep 13, 2008 3:18 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Or have all the kids called into Sam's or Jaden's rooms where they're teaching? *Shrugs* I dunno, I'm good with whatever.

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PostPosted: Sat Sep 13, 2008 5:11 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Yeah, that would be good too.

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PostPosted: Mon Sep 15, 2008 11:46 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

uh....dind't we discuss this WAY in the begining...? Like on page two or three?

(I was bored and read the entire thing again...heh heh...)

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