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Black Ghost
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 Posted: Sat Aug 23, 2008 4:01 am Post subject: Hauntings - A Critique Shop |
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Black Ghost, at your services! 
I'm trying to get my review count up as much as possible, so I'll be happy to critique your works. ^_^
THINGS I CRITIQUE:
-Other fiction
-Sci/fi Fiction
-Action/Adventure Fiction
-Fantasy Fiction
TYPES:
I'll often critique many aspects of your story, including:
-Plot
-Characters
-Grammar, punctuation
-Overall flow of story
If you want me to comment on something specific, be sure to tell me when you post your link. Otherwise, I'll just critique normally.
PROCEDURE:
I like to have things organized, so please include the title, genre, and wordcount, and specific comments if you have them. Also note that I don't do mulitple chapters.
It takes me a fair bit to critique well, so while I can't just rattle them off as you post links, know that when I do post your critique, it will be a meaningful and quality review of your work.
I'm not asking for anything concrete in return, but if anyone ever wants to PM feedback, I'll be glad to take it. ^_^
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"The Loser" by Kalliope
"All There Is" by JFW1415
"Murder She Drew" by scasha |
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Kalliope
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| Posted: Sat Aug 23, 2008 1:57 pm Post subject: |
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Hey,
I'd be really glad if you could take a look at The Loser (Other Fiction)
I'd be glad if you could give me a general overview on it. There's only the first part posted at the moment, so it shouldn't be too much work.
Thank you so much, in advance! |
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Black Ghost
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| Posted: Sat Aug 23, 2008 7:20 pm Post subject: |
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Done ^_^
Anyone else?
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| Posted: Sat Aug 23, 2008 7:56 pm Post subject: |
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All There Is
Other Fiction
Line by line.
1,792 words.
Thank you so much! Let me know when I can return the favor.
~JFW1415 |
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Black Ghost
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| Posted: Sun Aug 24, 2008 3:54 am Post subject: |
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Finished! Hope it helped.
Next?
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| Posted: Wed Aug 27, 2008 12:17 pm Post subject: |
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Hey can you take a look at Murder She Drew ?
Genre = Mystery (I put it in the Action/Adventure forum)
Word Count = 4,000 words
Type: Line Edits
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Black Ghost
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| Posted: Sat Aug 30, 2008 12:26 am Post subject: |
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Finished! Sorry it took a little while. ^^
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