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| 5/10 Does do. |
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| Posted: Fri Sep 05, 2008 5:40 pm Post subject: |
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| I was with you up until the metal pipe and the shoe. The birdies are a little more sinister than that. 6/10. |
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| Posted: Sat Sep 06, 2008 6:38 am Post subject: |
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| I'm gonna go with 4/10 because my math teacher last year beat that into our heads and now I really don't like variables. |
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| Posted: Sat Sep 06, 2008 2:52 pm Post subject: |
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| 8/10 ossim |
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| Posted: Sat Sep 06, 2008 3:02 pm Post subject: |
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er dont really understand it
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| Posted: Sat Sep 06, 2008 5:27 pm Post subject: |
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| 5/10 |
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| Posted: Sat Sep 06, 2008 11:02 pm Post subject: |
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| 6/10 |
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| Posted: Sat Sep 06, 2008 11:26 pm Post subject: |
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4/10
It sounds like a long advertisement. |
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| Posted: Sat Sep 06, 2008 11:39 pm Post subject: |
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It basically is.
8/10 because I like it. |
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| Posted: Sun Sep 07, 2008 12:28 am Post subject: |
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| 5/10 An advertizement? |
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| Posted: Sun Sep 07, 2008 12:41 am Post subject: |
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| lol, that's awesome. 8/10 |
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Shakespeare??? D:
Sorry. 3/10.
You need a quote from someone awesome like...I dunno...me! i'd give you a 10/10 then. |
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| Posted: Sun Sep 07, 2008 1:13 am Post subject: |
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I would give you a 0/10 for saying Shakespeare isn't awesome, but I'm rating quotes so I'll let it slide this one time!
6/10
Because I agree with the cliche thing.  |
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| 8/10 because that's what I gave up last time. |
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