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my love
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fallsforyoueasily
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Gender:  Age: 14 Joined: 16 Aug 2008 Posts: 12 Reviews: 2 Country: USA 300 Points
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Posted: Sun Oct 05, 2008 4:07 pm Post subject: my love |
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When everything starts to fall apart
And everything is going dark
I know that you will always be there and nothing can go wrong
We might fight but we will still come back around
We will have to learn to settle with the things we don't like
We'll have our obstacles, but we'll make it through
When things are wrong and we're at our low
We will run away and never let go
Hand in hand, arm in arm, and hearts as one
I look in your eyes and I don't only see the face of a angel
But the heart of gold that I have stole
And won over fair and square
When I see that you are next to me
And then I know we were always meant to be
I will always love the way that you love me
I know I was put here just for you
I know we are together for a reason
I know that everything will come out good
I give you all I can and all I have
I know I'm not the prettiest girl in the world
But I am your biggest fan |
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KissKiss08
Senior Writer

 Gender:  Age: 14 Joined: 12 Sep 2008 Posts: 140 Reviews: 13
344 Points
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Posted: Mon Oct 06, 2008 1:58 am Post subject: |
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This was cute.
I would like to tell you that we have a 2:1 polocy. Basically you have to have 2 reviews for every one poem or story. So, while I like you poem, you need to review. Because I saw from your portfolio that you have posted several peices of work. Keep posting, just try to keep the rules in mind.
I don't know if you knew that seeing how you seem to be knew here, but now you do so get to reviewing!
But, have fun too.
First to review!!!!!  |
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