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C.J. Mustang
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 Posted: Sun Oct 05, 2008 10:13 pm Post subject: |
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9 more days to post your entries, you guys!
Only two have came in so far, and they're gonna be tough to beat! Show me you've got what it takes to knock 'em off the scoreboard!  |
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KailaMarie
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C.J. Mustang
Novelist
Age: 16
Joined: 28 Apr 2008
Posts: 270
Reviews: 36
Country: In my novels
577 Points
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| Posted: Fri Oct 10, 2008 2:36 am Post subject: |
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hey, only 5 more days to post your entry for the contest!!  I can't believe the days went by so fast!  It was so fun, I think I'm going to consider making another one for another topic, but...  Anywho, so yeah, you guys have 5 more days to get your entries in! I can't wait to read them!!!!  |
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C.J. Mustang
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Joined: 28 Apr 2008
Posts: 270
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Country: In my novels
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| Posted: Sun Oct 12, 2008 4:13 am Post subject: |
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ok, only 2 more days to get your entries in! You'd better hurry up!
If you want to put an entry in, but done think you'll get it done in time for the deadline, then just PM me and I'll extend it for you! |
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Kaylyn
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| Posted: Wed Oct 15, 2008 5:19 pm Post subject: |
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It was the last battle, blood sprayed everywhere like an angry waterfall. I could taste it on my lips, I could feel its warm and sticky liquid as it hit my arm. My once snow white horse was now red, almost black. The groud was slick and my mare often lost her footing.
We were winning. Dragons swooped low in the sky, taking out our enemies. Trees left standing were burning from the torturing fire. There was a low loss of life. I was only searching frantically for one person though. My other half. Derrick. He was missing in action.
They had told us that he would be at this camp, so where was he?
"Private!" I heard someone yell urgently. My horse swiveled around to face the one who addressed me. "He's been found, follow me!"
Kicking my horse into a gallop I urged her faster, I had to find him. Battle cries were being sounded all around us as I tried to block them out. A whizzing arrow hit my horse square in the chest.
I was thrown into blood and landed on a body. A gruesome monster that dripped blood and had pointed fangs smiled evilly at me and raised his sword to finish me. Whipping out my own I met his with a clang of defience.
I would not die before I got to him, I had promised that I would marry him. Derrick had begged me to marry him before all this madness had began. But I had refused. I wish I hadn't. It was to late now though. If we both made this out alive I would marry him tomorrow.
I countered the beasts moves with mimicking it. Fighting what innocents would call dirty I tripped it. All was fair in love and war. I smiled to myself at the irony of the statement. Raising my sword to finish him off, I felt an arrow take flight and lodge in my back.
Gasping with pain, I drove my sword into the creatures weak spot, effectively killing him. Turning around, I knew I had to see my attacker before my life expired. It was Derrick holding a bow, he dropped it with surprised agony on his face. He made it to me before I faded into blackness.
"I'm sorry, I'm sorry," he cried.
Smiling at him I gazed into his blue eyes. They were so beautiful.
Using up my remaining strength I raised up to meet his lips. We kissed for the first and final time. My lips lingering on his. Gently pulling away I repeated my former thought, " All's fair in love and war," I gasped with my last breaths, smiling. His weak laughter was the last thing I heard as I felt lifted and expired. |
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C.J. Mustang
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| Posted: Thu Oct 16, 2008 3:08 am Post subject: |
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Ok, this was a very hard decision, but the results are in!
1st place: Sohini with Things left Unsaid!
2nd place:Kaylyn with an awesome untitled story!
and there's a tie!
3rd place: tnme22 with Brought Together by Book and Dog and He's Not Quite Ready by KailaMarie!
Remember, 1st place gets 300 pts and 5 reviews, 2nd place 200 pts and 2 reviews, and 3rd place gets 100 pts and 1 review (you all get a dozen cookies for doing an awesome job!) ^_^
So, PM me the posts you want me to review and I'll get to them as soon as possible. The points may take a bit longer, since I have to earn them, so just be patient and you'll get them also ASAP.
You all rock! Keep doing an awesome job! |
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Sohini
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| Posted: Thu Oct 16, 2008 6:44 am Post subject: |
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Results out soo soon!!
Yay CJ!!!
O.O *that's my name*
*yay dance*
First contest I ever won!!
Well done all!!! |
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Kaylyn
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| Posted: Thu Oct 16, 2008 1:03 pm Post subject: |
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| Yeah, I won second place!!!! Thanks. |
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KailaMarie
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| Posted: Mon Oct 20, 2008 12:08 am Post subject: |
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Woo hoo! Congrats everyone!
-gobbles up cookies- Thank you!! |
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