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PostPosted: Thu Oct 09, 2008 11:39 pm    Post subject: Eye Reply with quote






I haven't altered these in anyway, they're 100% mine and not photoshopped in anyway.

I just set the camera to the right setting of clearness and voila!


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PostPosted: Fri Oct 10, 2008 12:03 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Very nice I must say. You must have worked with the lights in the room because flash would have ruined your shot. How many shots did you have to delete to get these ones? I think that if they were just a little farther off the eye that the surrounding skin wouldn't have showed up so dark and it would have made it way better but still great pics

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Thank you, player

I took about five to get these two.

Thanks for the review and the star!


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PostPosted: Sun Oct 12, 2008 4:33 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

These are SO cool! I wish I could get shots like this with my camera. Great job! This must have taken some patience and planning!

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PostPosted: Sun Oct 12, 2008 4:43 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Wow. First off, congrats on getting your camera to obey you. Mine never listens like that.

Very cool and captivating, but I must say, your eyes scare me. What color do you call that▬ Hazel or green? The details of your eye was so vivid and you could count your eyelashes; I almost did, but I got bored and gave up. Well, I didn't really get bored, the eye wouldn't quit starin' at me so I had to leave it alone. In the first picture your eye looks surprised; but in the second it looks more relaxed and content; In both it looks like you were going to cry Laughing.

The thing at the bottom; what you call a bird looks odd. I can't make anything out of it. Anyway, good shots and keep it up!

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PostPosted: Sun Oct 12, 2008 2:25 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Thanks springrain and imaginationgurl, I'm glad you liked them.

I got rid of that last picture of the bird, springrain, you're right. It really doesn't fit with the topic.

Thankyou for your great comments!


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PostPosted: Sun Oct 12, 2008 3:15 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

You have very pretty eyes. I've always wanted greenish eyes, but Mine are dark brown.

The lighting was a little better in the first pic, but both are very good.
When I first saw it, I thought it was a little creepy. I expected a drawing, I guess.

I'm guessing you didn't use flash on this, which is probably good for two reasons. 1) You don't want to have the camera really close to your eyes and flash. Ow. Very Happy 2)Your pupils would most likely have dialated, and I like the size and depth of them in these pictures. Very Happy

Neat pictures. Cool

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PostPosted: Thu Nov 13, 2008 8:47 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Wow I really like the first one - so startling and clear. The second one dosen't grab my attention as much.

I am really shocked that there was no programmes used to enhance these...just wow...thats brilliant that they are so clear - you must be really pelased, I sure would! but then again a camera that lose to my eyes they would be closed through fear of the flash!!!!

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PostPosted: Thu Nov 13, 2008 11:42 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I envy you and your ability to take clear pictures of eyes.

These are amazing. And no programs used to help clear them up at all? That's incredible. What setting did you use?

I love the coloring, especially the first one. The second one seems a little too dark to me, but it's still really good. Both of them are simply amazing.

Good job!

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PostPosted: Sun Nov 30, 2008 4:49 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Wow, these are a-mazing! No seriously, I love the first one especially, your eyes are so nice, I love them! I wish I could actually take a picture, seriously I'm not capable of lifting a camera and taking a picture, I swear. Ok; maybe that's a bit too far but I am terrible at photography Wink Laughing

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