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dreamintechnicolour
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 Posted: Sun Oct 12, 2008 12:34 am Post subject: |
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Granted but I wish that you die a painful death.
I wish that I didn't have to go to school tomorrow. |
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| Posted: Sun Oct 12, 2008 12:37 am Post subject: |
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granted, but you have to go to school every other day for the rest of your life.
I wish my eye wasn't itchy from allergies. |
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Firestalker
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| Posted: Sun Oct 12, 2008 2:17 am Post subject: |
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Granted, but you don't have any eyes now.
I wish you can eat an elephant. |
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dreamintechnicolour
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| Posted: Sun Oct 12, 2008 8:45 am Post subject: |
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Granted, but it makes me sick I infect you with elephant disease.
I wish I could eat a whole chocolate cake right now... |
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| Posted: Sun Oct 12, 2008 8:52 am Post subject: |
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Granted, but you dont get to eat another cajke in your life.
I wish some one would critique my story 'Bloodlust chapter 1 part 2' |
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oneeyedunicornhunter
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| Posted: Tue Oct 14, 2008 11:45 am Post subject: |
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Granted, but the critiquer(?) will encounter a server error and their critique will be lost. Then, he/she will not have the patience to write the whole thing over again.
I wish I could be a girl for a day. |
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| Posted: Tue Oct 14, 2008 12:41 pm Post subject: |
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Granted, but you will have to critique my story twice.
I wish the wish before will be granted without any side effects. |
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| Posted: Tue Oct 14, 2008 11:10 pm Post subject: |
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granted, but then in a totally unrelated accident your computer spontaniously combusts and you can't come on this site for a week.
I wish I didn't have to do science fair. |
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| Posted: Wed Oct 15, 2008 2:30 am Post subject: |
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Granted, but if you choose not to, you'll fail.
Edit: Almost forgot MY wish! 
I wish that I had an unlimited supply of cotton candy. |
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| Posted: Wed Oct 15, 2008 4:46 am Post subject: |
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Granted,but you die eating it.
I wish you would get a non corrupted wish. |
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| Posted: Wed Oct 15, 2008 10:46 am Post subject: |
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He does... but not from me.
I wish I would get a simple hampurger... with cheese.. the normal size, not burned, with no poisons of anykind, acids, alkaline, no other disturbing substances... just a good old cheese burger...
Try and corrupt that-... MWHAHAHAHA |
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| Posted: Thu Oct 16, 2008 8:57 am Post subject: |
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Thats easy to corrupt, Lord Anzius.
Granted, You get the cheeseburger and eat it.
Then you choke to death 
HAHA 
I wish I would die and live in heaven. |
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| Posted: Fri Oct 17, 2008 2:44 am Post subject: |
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System Error!! Incorruptible!!
No more wishing you would die. |
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| Posted: Fri Oct 17, 2008 9:46 am Post subject: |
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Oops. Sorry.
Then I wish I could fly without tiring out. |
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Firestalker
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| Posted: Wed Oct 22, 2008 5:36 am Post subject: |
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Of course you can corrupt the wish of dying.
Granted but it takes approximately an eternity of years for you to die in which you will be forced to kill yourself over and over again in different ways and endure the pain.
MWAHAHA 
Grated, you can fly but you keep falling every three seconds.
I wish you could fly. |
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