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Young Writers Society


Lyddz101

About Lyddz101

I'm 15 with a bunch of stories that I would like honest opinions about, and I like to give my opinions on other people's works. I don't always finish a story, so usually the comments I receive on the first few paragraphs determine whether I continue.



In a hole in the ground there lived a hobbit. Not a nasty, dirty, wet hole, filled with the ends of worms and an oozy smell, nor yet a dry, bare, sandy hole with nothing in it to sit down on or to eat: it was a hobbit-hole, and that means comfort.
— JRR Tolkien