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Music In Me - Chapter 1
Music In Me - Chapter 1
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PostPosted: Fri Mar 07, 2008 1:14 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
Ha, that poem rocks! I agree with what Jabber said about not feeling anything for it (except amusement), but it's hilarious that this was on a bag of grapes.

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PostPosted: Fri Mar 07, 2008 10:49 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
That was just the giggle I needed, yoyo!

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This was so cute!! This just made me laugh. You write the funniest poems, ever!!!! Keep on writing.

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PostPosted: Sat Mar 08, 2008 7:23 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
This was pretty good....I must say. this does give me inspiration, too. Shows how much one can draw life from simple objects...

Like a Psychological Thrilllllllllller.

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OMG! That is the best poem ever! (so you don't think I'm crazy, I'm sarcastic a lot)

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PostPosted: Wed Mar 12, 2008 8:15 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
You know, the first time I read through, it really irked me. But you know? Now I really like it ^_^ It's just a different way of thinking around things ^_^

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