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| Outpost 101 chapter 7 is up and ready for critiquing. |
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| Posted: Sun Mar 23, 2008 2:05 am Post subject: |
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*Pokes*
I'd love one!  But I'm too lazy to get links...
'All Eyes On Us' in Romance
and/or
'For Matty' in Other
and/or
'Reality' in Other (about to edit this one, could use some critiques before I do so.)
They're all short, about 500-1500 words long.
Thanks a million!
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| Posted: Sun Mar 23, 2008 1:33 pm Post subject: |
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| I'm now up-to-date with all critiques so far so feel free to give me a few more links. |
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| Posted: Sun Mar 23, 2008 1:55 pm Post subject: |
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Hi Heather,
if you have any spare time I'd be really thankful if you'd take a look at this:
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic27514.html
I could really use some help 
Thank you 
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| Posted: Mon Mar 31, 2008 11:46 am Post subject: |
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Got the next chapter ready:
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic28008.html |
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| Posted: Wed Apr 09, 2008 8:07 pm Post subject: |
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Chapter ten is up and ready to go.
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic28575.html |
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| Posted: Thu Apr 10, 2008 1:57 am Post subject: |
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| If you could check out the second one in my siggy I'd be oh-so-grateful!! Thanks. |
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Dynamo
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| Posted: Fri Apr 11, 2008 12:44 pm Post subject: |
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11 is ready to be critiqued.
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic28663.html |
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| Posted: Fri Apr 11, 2008 1:03 pm Post subject: |
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kittah--
No need for it, per se, but any of the Foreign Markets in the Scripts section would appreciate a quick glance.
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic26422.html
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| Posted: Sun Apr 13, 2008 3:15 pm Post subject: |
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Chapter 12 is ready, I think you'll really enjoy this one.
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/post344436.html#344436 |
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| Posted: Tue Apr 15, 2008 11:37 am Post subject: |
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Here's chapter 13, hope you like this one, too.
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic28861.html |
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| Posted: Wed Apr 16, 2008 2:12 am Post subject: |
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*Pokes* Want more work? ;P
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/post346536.html#346536
~JFW1415 |
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| Posted: Fri Apr 18, 2008 6:28 pm Post subject: |
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| Okay so I need to do lots of reviews this month so please give me all your links! Also, I may be interested in taking on a series of chapters for a novel or two if anyone has one in progress? |
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