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Kitty15
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 Posted: Sat Mar 08, 2008 11:45 pm Post subject: Need a critique? |
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I want another star. That means I need all of you to post your links here of pieces you want critiques on because having a list of links helps to motivate me. If anyone wants to recommend the work of others, that's fine too but otherwise here's your chance to self-advertise.
What I critique: I will critique absolutely anything you give me but I'm not great with fan-fiction, lyrics or romantic fiction so critiques on those pieces might be a little brief. |
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| Posted: Sun Mar 09, 2008 12:09 am Post subject: |
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Ah, I always feel so cheeky asking people for critiques ><"
but if you could take a quick look at A&E 2.1 it would be funky as jam |
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| Posted: Sun Mar 09, 2008 1:59 am Post subject: |
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^_^ New prologue for DoaV!
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic26581.html |
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Kitty15
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| Posted: Sun Mar 09, 2008 11:18 am Post subject: |
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ltf - you shouldn't. If people are offering, they have their reasons and seriously, you're helping me out.
Both shall be done before the end of today. I'm putting a few hours aside this afternoon so I need at least another four or five links. |
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Here is my new story Albus, a fanfiction, but I put it on Action/Adventure don't ask why I don't really know why any more either. Anywho, this is chapter one.
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic26930.html |
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Here's one for a friend of mine. It's a great story, but seems to have been buried. =P
Preface: http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic24346.html
Chapter One : http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic24409.html
There are 8 chapters right now. If you have time to read all of them and critique, then that'd be great! |
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| Posted: Sun Mar 09, 2008 8:32 pm Post subject: |
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Still got those last three to finish but I think I'll leave them until tomorrow. Hope you don't mind and feel free to add more to the list. I've worked out that I need to do about eighteen a week to reach my target so don't worry if it's starting to look like I've loads to do. It will just mean you might have to wait a day or two. Thanks for your support,
Heather xx |
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| Posted: Mon Mar 10, 2008 12:05 am Post subject: |
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http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic24673.html
I'd love a critique on this songfic I did.
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| Posted: Mon Mar 10, 2008 11:39 pm Post subject: |
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I'd really like another opinion on my story "Woman of the City", especially now that I'm thinking about expanding upon it.
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic26881.html |
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