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 Posted: Fri Apr 25, 2008 2:58 pm Post subject: |
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(jess) *ok I just snagged a comp and logged on but I won't be on until I get to my house.*
The blade that tore into Tobi's back hurt like hell, I finsally got enough corage to cradle him into my arms to make sure he was still breathing. The blood still gushing from him.... what the hell was I suppose to do? |
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| Posted: Fri Apr 25, 2008 9:16 pm Post subject: |
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Tobi-
Darkness. That was swept across the empty icy plains. He was alone, like always. But something was different there was someone with him- in the darkness.
"Tobi." The voice called to him.
He gasped. It was Mimi. Her dark velvoty hair glisened in the wind, revealing her flawless angelic face, and her dark green orbs in her eyes. She was gorgeuos.
"Tobi, you must forgive yourself. Move on. I want you to move on." Mimi told him.
Tobi reached a hand towards her, feeling like he could touch her- though she was far away. He couldn't move his legs. He was sad.
"I-I, am sorry. I love you and I only want to be with you." Tobi whispered.
She heard him as clear as day. She giggled. "Tobi-kun, I am always with you. I want you to be happy, I want you to find new love. With that I will bless the both of you forever."
Tobi nodded, tears shedded from his eyes. "I-I'll always love you."
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Maria listened to his heart. It was beating faster, and his chest was moving. He was breathing again.
She smiled. Jessica whiped the tears away. TObi was alive. |
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| Posted: Fri Apr 25, 2008 10:49 pm Post subject: |
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(Jess)
Ok, we got a heartbeat, he wasn't breathing for a while so I couldn't breathe, and I felt as if I were suffocating. The color finally came back to his face. Thank God. But all we could really do was wait... Until he woke what to do till then? Maria and I still held onto him, we wouldn't let him go until he awoke. Not a chance in hell. |
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| Posted: Fri Apr 25, 2008 11:50 pm Post subject: |
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Tobi-
He wanted to sleep, but he forced his eyes open. Tobi was in the arms of Maria and Jessica. BOth of whom, looked releaved to see his eye's open. |
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| Posted: Sat Apr 26, 2008 12:22 am Post subject: |
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(Jess)
It hurt it him to breathe, because it hurt for me to breathe. I sagged against a nearby wall pressing all of my body weight on it. All of sudden my stomach growled, it hurt like hell like a huge fist was cleanching inside me. I felt sweat begin to well up on my forehead I hadn't eaten, it happened to all of the were-cats who didn't eat they would eventually die.
*ok my turn to be sorry, sorry Jesse and Tobi*
I violently jerked and cried out, my body felt like it was being devored for the inside out. I clutched my stomach, kneeled over to throw up but nothing came out of my mouth.
"What's happening?" Tobi moaned.
"It's all my fault. I'm sorry, I refused to eat food, I haven't eaten in four days. I was trying to kill myself."
"You did what?" Tobi narrowed his eyes, obviously in pure agony.
"What are we suppose to do?! Eat something Jesse." Maria shouted.
"No! It's too late. My body is already re-jecting everything." I moaned.
"So is mine!" Tobi glared. "What's wrong with you Jess? You know better!"
I did, I did know better. But I couldn't tell them the truth on what was happening to me. They may try to keep me here. |
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| Posted: Sat Apr 26, 2008 3:05 am Post subject: |
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Tobi-
Tobi, he was in pain. But he didn't want Jessica to die. "Eat me," He said.
Jessica dn Maria stared at him. WAs he crazy!
"If you die I'll never forgive myself. Eat me." Tobi added.
Jessica couldn't believe it. |
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| Posted: Sat Apr 26, 2008 5:14 pm Post subject: |
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| *Did you read my post on the end of page 24 maki?* |
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| Posted: Sat Apr 26, 2008 6:41 pm Post subject: |
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(Jess)
"I can't eat you! Are you mad?" I asked, if I ate him it would be like eating myself.
"Do it!" He yelled.
"Not on you're life." I glared, maybe he had gone bonkers.
"I'm in a room with mentaily incompassiated people." Maria said.
Maria knew exactly what she was talking about, the first stage in dying this way was sweating, check. It had already happened, then you'd startjolting violently and then you'd shift, and then you'd collapse and never wake up-this of course took time.
I stayed against the wall, backing further and furhter away from Tobi and Maria. I already started sweating and now I was shaking violently-I felt like I was having a sezure. Blood started coming out of my mouth as I shook, like a vibrating cell phone. I wa in Maria's arms in seconds, still shaking. I was dying.
"What do we do? What the hells happening to her?" Maria asked still struggling to hold me down.
"She's dying." Tobi said.
*I'm not leaving the storybook, so don't you dare kill my charater  * |
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| Posted: Sat Apr 26, 2008 8:33 pm Post subject: |
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(Jess)
I did my best to shield the pain from Tobi, since we were linked. But that meant taking in more pain than I actually had to have taking my pain and his.
"Damnit!" Tobi yelled shoving his wrist into my mouth and pricking it on my teeth, I felt the blood slow run down my throat.
I started shaking even more, images of people he loved and cared about flooded into my head and memories and flash backs came into my mind his life played like a mini-movie in my head everything going so fast. Then, I saw Mimi. Holy crap! I wasn't suppose to be drinking his blood, it was poison! I read about linking your never suppose to hurt them or drink their blood. It's poison. I tried to spit it out but his damn wrist was in the way. I was choking on his blood, it was killing me. Maria pushed his wrist out of my mouth.
"That's enough." Maria said.
I spit it out, and felt trears stinging in my eyes. I had just saw his whole life flash before my eyes. I felt all the pain he as feeling... all the guilt. |
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| Posted: Sat Apr 26, 2008 8:38 pm Post subject: |
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"Tobi!You're a damed ideot!"Maria said pushing her wrist into Jess's mouth.
It sliped down into her throught...
*Do you guys never pay attention to posts?* |
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| Posted: Sat Apr 26, 2008 8:42 pm Post subject: |
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*haha sorry* (Jess)
I tried to push Maria's wrist away.
"Stop it! You need it you idiot. You're going to die!" She yelled.
"What's wrong with my wrist?" Tobi glared. |
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| Posted: Sat Apr 26, 2008 8:46 pm Post subject: |
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"Your linked...you almost killed her.Next time read some of those old books in our libray It will help you a lot!"she hissed at him.She was kinda pissed....
*as usuall...*shrug* |
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| Posted: Sat Apr 26, 2008 8:51 pm Post subject: |
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(Jess)
I forced her wrist out of my mouth.
"Why won't you let us help you?!" Maria asked, angry.
"I don't need the help. Now get your wrist out of my mouth!" I yelled. |
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| Posted: Sat Apr 26, 2008 8:58 pm Post subject: |
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| "Fine! What do you want us to do then?"she asked even more anoyed... |
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| Posted: Sat Apr 26, 2008 9:52 pm Post subject: |
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Tobi-
Everyone looked. Jared and Amber entered the room. They carried food (Whatever Jessica eats?).
Jared sighed. "I knew that going out to get Jessica something to eat was smart. Just cause you don't tell me anything doesn't mean I don't know!"
Everyone knew it. The clan's leader knew all thier needs.
*Hurray Jared and Amber saved us ^_^* |
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