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The Scariest Things
The Scariest Things

by Teddybear22 in Dramatic Poetry
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PostPosted: Tue Apr 22, 2008 11:54 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Sam~

Sam glared at Eris and grabbed Sirith's hand, running at full speed towards Zues. She knew she couldn't get rid of Eris...but she could blind her momentarily. She smiled and silently called on a ball of light, shooting it back at Eris, running towards Zues again. She looked back at Sirith, who was smiling. She stopped quickly, thinking on what to do and kissed Sirith deeply, turning and running again.

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PostPosted: Wed Apr 23, 2008 12:12 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Eris laughed when she saw the light, her vision blurred and blacken, but only momentarily. She easily caught up with the two of them, grabbing the back on Sam's shirt and throwing her back.

Out of the corner of her eye she watched Sirith to keep an eye on his actions.

"Hello again my dear," said Eris in a sickly sweet voice.

She held up the apple and smiled wickedly. The expression on Sam's face turned blank as she stood up and walked towards Sirith. Eris leaned against a wall and watched with glee as Sam got closer to him.

"Now." she commanded.

Sam's arm rose up like a puppet, and then without a moments thought, punched Sirith hard in his gut. Eris' smile widened as her grip on Sam let go.

"Sirith!" she said, looking at her fist and then back to him. "I- I'm sorry! I-"

"I ask again," interupted Eris. "What now?"

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PostPosted: Wed Apr 23, 2008 12:17 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

**O.O I is stunned**
[Sirith]
before Eris caught up
Sirith blinked, his brain going into overdrive. His eyes were huge and he stood motionless for a moment, grinning stupidly. The feeling lingered, leaving him thinking crystal clear for once.

I love her. The idea shocked him.

Sam turned back, laughed, and dragged him forward. He tripped over himself as they ran then regained his composure and started running.

in response to Eris' post
Sirith placed a hand delicately over his gut, nodding to Sam's apology.

"I ask again," Eris interrupted, "What now?"

Sirith gave a taunting smile and raced toward Mt. Olympus, "Now we win."

Eris followed swiftly, but slammed into the air as if there were an invisible wall there. Powerful gods such as Eris were not allowed into Zeus's shrine room.

Sirith gave Sam a smile, ignoring Eris' glares, and walked forward.

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They entered Zeus's roman style lair and rushed for the throne where he sat.

Zeus's eyes opened, and his facial expression changed from thoughtful to welcoming, "Sirith, I wondered when you were going to arrive."

Sirith nodded, not sure how to answer. He knew I was coming?

"Yes, I knew," Zeus answered, then his gaze flickered to Sam, "This is her, I presume?"

Sirith looked at him blankly for a moment, then he slipped his hand into hers. "Yeah, this is her," he answered, giving her hand a squeeze and smiling.

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PostPosted: Wed Apr 23, 2008 12:35 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

*Sigh... I'm thinking about leaving*

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PostPosted: Wed Apr 23, 2008 12:46 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

* Shocked Wait. What? Why?!?!?*

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PostPosted: Wed Apr 23, 2008 1:10 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

*I don't really have a part in this*

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PostPosted: Wed Apr 23, 2008 1:26 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

**no, stay! you could always create another character!**

**btw, kittykat and i posted at the same time and now i'm confused!**

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PostPosted: Wed Apr 23, 2008 1:29 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

*I'll get you a part! Very Happy I thought you were going to try to destroy Entry?*

[Giovanna]

She poured a glass of water and sipped it as she walked into the livingroom, ignoring the sound of the door opening, thinking it was just another emotion. ...and technically it was, a former emotion to be exact.

The glass almost slipped out of Giovanna's hands when she stepped in. Naomi was sitting on the couch. No doubt, the real Naomi!

"What are you doing here? Does anyone else know that your here?" she set the glass down on the coffee table. "More importantly, do you remember anything?"

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PostPosted: Wed Apr 23, 2008 1:33 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Naomi-

She sighed. "no I still don't remember, I'm waiting for Viola-sama. Do you know where she is Giovanna-son?" She asked.

Giovanna shook her head. "I'm sorry."

Naomi rubbed her head." DO you know where Entry is?"

The question shocked Giovanna.

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PostPosted: Wed Apr 23, 2008 1:42 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

**Who's post are we supposed to follow?! Eris' or Sirith's??**

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PostPosted: Wed Apr 23, 2008 3:19 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Viola-

Viola jumped and screamed as Orpheus jumped out of the water. She felt like such and idiot. She pressed her hand to her head and started to walk away.
"Well, wiat." Orpheus shouted after her.
"No. I think it's better if I'm just not around you."
"Why?" He caught up with her.
"Because I tend to hurt the people I get close to. I'm relationship challenged and I don't want to hurt you-or get you killed, like previous relationships. And besides I knw you probably don;t even feel the same way about me." She secretly wished she was wrong, but it would never work.

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PostPosted: Wed Apr 23, 2008 12:08 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

*I guess I'm with Giovanna and Naomi...Hey Tex, where ya' at?*

Jacin walked into the room slowly. She saw Naomi with Giovanna, and could feel no sickly sweet feeling of pretend love. This time, she had the real Naomi.

Silently thanking the Almighty that Sam and Sirith were gone, Jacin walked over to Naomi and Giovanna. "Hello, Naomi."

When Naomi looked up at her, Jacin was overrun by emotions...love, heartbreak, bitter despair, and rage. Jacin was shaking all over from the overload of emotion. She bit her tongue and bit back a cry.

"Naomi..." Jacin managed to gasp out, "what's happened?"

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PostPosted: Wed Apr 23, 2008 12:17 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I lost track of my Character 5 pages ago.

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PostPosted: Wed Apr 23, 2008 1:04 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

*Let's see Ghostwriter...the last few times you've been controlling Entry, so the last time you used Tex was....when he was sitting on the bed talking to the Almighty about someone who"fancied him". Hope that helps!*

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PostPosted: Wed Apr 23, 2008 9:42 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

*Entry made Naomi kill Haimon- now she wants revenge*

Naomi-

She didn't want to say anything, if she did it would be over. Naomi looked awa- not answering Jacin.

Jacin just stared at her. "well?"


Giovanna placed her hand on Jacin's shoulder, and shook her head.

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