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PostPosted: Sun Apr 20, 2008 11:00 pm    Post subject: Witching Hour Reply with quote

*the last one didn't quite work.*

plot: Many legends exist in the world we live. Vampires, lycanthropes, demons, and dragons. They are the rulers of the night, but now they have faded into the realms of myth and legend. But in every legend, there lies a grain of truth. Long ago the monsters walked the earth, and although they were many times stronger then the fearful humans, the humans had one great advantage. Numbers. Eventually their sheer numbers wore these great races down. Until only one was left standing of each race. But those that survived were the Lords, the rulers of each race.

In anger at the genocide committed against them, the survivors banded together and struck back against the humans, destroying a third of the known world and population. The humans, who could not stand against these mightiest of foes, instead turned to one of their own. This man, although human, was possessed of divine, god given powers. He used them against the Lords defeating them one by one, but rather then kill them, he instead sealed them away.

And so the Monster Lords have slept, for 1500 years. It is now present day, and the world has forgotten about the other races that once walked it. Many years have passed and now there are only two living descendants of that great man, one is a fifteen year old girl who, as a baby, was adopted by a normal couple, she lives an ordinary life. Knowing nothing of the holy powers that are her birth right, or the legacy her ancestor has left behind. The other descendant is her blood brother, older then his sister by ten years. This one is fully aware of his heritage, but just because his powers are of divine nature doesn't mean he takes after his ancestor so completely. In a quest for power and world dominance (the typical bad guy stuff), he has gone and undone the seals of his ancestor. Attempting to make the Monster Lords sealed within his servants, instead he has caused something altogether different to happen.

He released the monsters to wreak havoc upon the world once more!!! Bwa ha ha! (just kidding, couldn't resist). Not being stupid, the ancestor had created a double seal. The powers of the Lords are still largely sealed away, though they can be fully brought out under certain circumstances. The ancestor also embedded a compulsion into the souls of the monster lords. "When next you wake, you will be compelled to seek out and swear loyalty to my one true heir. And act as safe guard against time of greatest need."

Now we have two problems, one they were awoken before the "time of greatest need." And two, no one knows or can tell, which sibling is the "one true heir." This is where we stand at the beginning of the story book. Which sibling will you side with? What path will you walk? And what will you do in a world, that no longer has a place for one such as you?

*if you guys want you can choose to be one of the human descendants, but I stress there are only two of these roles. The rest are monsters, and no two can be of the same race.*

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rules: The typical stuff applies here. No god-moding no killing off characters without permission that stuff. and you are limited to two characters. Unless you're going to act as one of the two siblings, your character must be a monster. Also none of the monsters can be of the same race.
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character: please follow this character outline.

name-
age- (actual age and how old you look, don't count the past 1500 years they've been sleeping)
gender-
race-
appearance-
personality-
history-
power/abilities- (the abilities that come with being the ruler of the race. Also list the restraint placed on his/her power and how to temporarily remove it.)
weapons-
other-

*alright, I'll start the storybook once three or four people join, at that point I'll also start a DT.*
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PostPosted: Sun Apr 20, 2008 11:01 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

name- Seda Til' Isani
age- 253 (looks 17)
gender- male
race- Mazoku, a race of high level demons strongly connected to the dragons. Basically they are dragons that were born as humans, but with wings, and can shift between human and dragon form Their souls take the form of smaller dragons that are their life long companions. Before their extermination, they were divided into five tribes depending on their elemental abilities. The "ruler" is capable of using them all.

appearance- in armour- http://photobucket.com/mediadetail/?media=http%3A%2F%2Fi239.photobucket.com%2Falbums%2Fff25%2Fazrael_nox%2FAngels%2520and%2520Wings%2Fangel-blackwings6.jpg&searchTerm=boy%20with%20wings&pageOffset=0

normally- http://photobucket.com/image/boy%20with%20wings/blackangel546/Wings/AngelBoy.png?o=2

personality- Seda is one of those people with a volcanic personality. Stubborn, reckless and competitive in the extreme. Extremely loyal to his friends. A short temper and slightly naive, sarcastic and a smartass. He is prideful and arrogant, but curious about the world around him. A cunning tactician, Seda has his own, very strange honor code, and will follow it even when it clashes with the rules of society. A bad liar. Has the tendency to follow his heart before his head. The type who likes to fight for the sake of fighting and is constantly looking for strong rivals.

history- Over the years Seda has had a run of extremely bad luck. He was born the younger of a pair of twins, and his people believed him cursed because of the way he changed in battle. So he was ostracized almost from the day he was born. His brother died when they were children. (monsters, or immortals, have lots of trouble having children, since they live so long, and young monsters can die easily while their powers are developing) Seda was then given the "honor" of being crown prince, as his fathers only heir. When the war came he was right in the thick of it. And in the middle of the lords destruction, he met, and fell in love with, a human girl who betrayed him, allowing him to be sealed.

power/abilities- His powers are elemental by nature, he can use Wind, Fire, Water, Thunder, and Light. He can shift between his dragon form and his humanoid form. The restraint on his powers is the crest that is burned into his back, like a tattoo. (http://tanesh.deviantart.com/art/Mitch-s-Wings-Photo-49208896) When he believes he is on the verge of death his full powers come out. His race believed he was cursed because of his ability to Soul Jump, (ie: invade and take over the minds of those weaker then him)

weapons- Various swords and daggers, favors the two swords style.
other- if you're wondering about his coloring, when he fights his hair, eyes, and wings turn black, denoting the negative emotions of battle, he normally has gold hair, white wings, and gold eyes. Up for love.

a picture of his soul dragon Rai, http://sonitweek.deviantart.com/art/Little-Dragon-62718766

*yes there are a lot of pictures I know*


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PostPosted: Sun Apr 20, 2008 11:26 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Name: Snake Undo
Age: 150( 12 apperance)
Gender: Male
Race: Dragon.
Apperance: Red hair, Spiked all over. Small, Sharp teeth and red eyes.
Personality: Young, Brave, imitature.
History: Was the youngest of the lords. He often was made fun of for his short stature and is Curious and friendly to people.
Powers: The power to control Flames. restraint is that he can't produce flames from his hands like he use too.
Weapons: None actually. He can transform.

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PostPosted: Mon Apr 21, 2008 12:36 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

***Can I be the girl, and does she have anything specail that I should get pics of or anything??***

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PostPosted: Mon Apr 21, 2008 12:47 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

*sure, and nothing special, just make sure she doesn't know about her abilities or family history, and like I said she was adopted as a baby.*
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PostPosted: Mon Apr 21, 2008 12:56 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Name: Lilith Udame

Age: 215 (Looks 12)

Gender: Female

Race: Cat Demon

Apperance: Her but, with piercing red eyes, white cat ears, a white tail, and pointed fangs

Personality: Brave, imature at time, loving and loyal

History: Her parents both died at a young age.

Powers: Control water and transforming

Weapons: Two, glowing long swords

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PostPosted: Mon Apr 21, 2008 12:57 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

***Wait, but how will the people sealed get out????**** Oh and can you put your pictures in this so the page isn't streached. You put [url=(the url here)] What you call it[/url]


name- Kimmy

age- 15 (Right?)

gender- Female

race- Human ?

appearance- Her

personality- Sweet, shy, active, she can talk your ear off if she gets nervous. She doesn't trust people right away, it takes a little while to gain her trust.

history- She remembers a little about when she was in foster homes, but then she was adopted and lives with a family that treats her like her own.

power/abilities- Devine by nature. I think that means she can control the elements.

weapons- None at the moment. She has no clue what she is in for.

other- Up for love. But I don't care if she does fall in love. (((I wanna claim Seda if I can. But don't care either way))))

Oh she is the other heir.

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PostPosted: Mon Apr 21, 2008 1:50 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

name- Kaku
age- 18 (1022 )
gender- Male
race- Demon
appearance- Pale white skin color, dark blue horns
personality- Nice and cool doesnt get mad much
history- Born from the smoke of an volcano
power/abilities- Can fly, Can become smoke and can summon smoke and control it, wind can blow me away when its strong enough and when I in my smoke fourm
weapons-
other- Smoke come out of his mounth when he opens it, smoke comes of eye and nose consitaly,it for a fight and love

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PostPosted: Mon Apr 21, 2008 3:10 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

*one thing, when restrained the Monster's look like humans. and to answer TN cowgirl's questions, the Monster's were released by the other human. "Kimmy's" 25 year old brother. Reread the plot in the first post for details. And Kimmy's powers are divine by nature, the rest you can decide for yourself. Alright we can start now. And TNcowgirl, I don't mind if you claim Seda, just keep in mind he's going to be difficult, as he was already betrayed once before.*

Seda-

Seda felt something warm wash over his body. Then he took a breath and opened his eyes for the first time in fifteen hundred years. The first thing he noticed was the sunlight pouring through a hole in the ruins roof. The light shafted down to illuminate several sealing circles scattered across the chamber floor.

He flexed his night black wings, and brushed hair out of his face. Fisting gauntlet covered hands, Seda leaped up and out of the broken circle he stood in. He was disoriented, his sense of time out of place, the last thing he remembered was that damned Sorcerer's chanting, Ashaya's tear streaked face. And then, endless darkness.

Pain split his head and a voice drifted back to him, more memory then anything else. "When next you wake, you will be compelled to seek out and swear loyalty to my one true heir. And act as safe guard against time of greatest need."

"That cunning bastard. He didn't just Seal me, he Bound me." Frustrated Seda shook his head, glancing over he saw several of the other circles were glowing, he guessed someone was unsealing them from somewhere in the ruined temple. But who, and for what?

Sighing Seda leaned against the wall and waited impatiently for the others to wake.
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PostPosted: Mon Apr 21, 2008 4:13 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Kaku~

Seda noticed a statue looking like a man with wings in a corner. The statue started to break and crack open and smoke started to arise from the cracks. Then the statue brust open and smoke started to cover the floor, up to Seda's knees. Seda was not suprised of this. The creature from the statue stud up and stretched.

Then he notice seda. "Long time, no see" he said. "Yeah tell me about it, Kaku" said Seda.

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Snake

He felt his peaceful nap break with light.
A light that he never thought to expect forever.
He felt his stone break loose and finally he fell to the ground.

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PostPosted: Mon Apr 21, 2008 7:30 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Seda-

Some of the circles surrounding statues still gleamed. Kaku sat near Seda stretching his wings. Seda watched as Snake's statue crumbled and the small dragon stretched his arms glancing around the temple. He caught sight of Kaku and Seda, and came over to wait with them.

He grinned his fangs flashing in the sunlight. "So, I take it I wasn't the only one Sealed?" Snake asked.

"Obviously." Kaku said dryly. "Otherwise we wouldn't be here right now."

Seda barked out a laugh. "I'm more worried about the Binding then the Sealing. But I've got two questions I'd like answered right now. Who woke us up, and what year is it?"
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Lilith~

Lilith yawned and shook off the remaining pieces of stone. She flicked her red eyes across the ruins. "Seda, Kaku, Snake!" She called, waving. She smiled and walked over to them.

"Anyone else?" asked Snake. Lilith shuffled her feet, growing impatient.

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*****OK*****

Kimmy----

"I'm just going to the park, now where else. I promise." Kimmy argued with her mom. Well it was her adopted mom, but mom none the less.

"No, you won't have anyone with you and I dont' want you to get hurt." Mom argued.

"I'll take Camo, he's a gernmen shepard no one will even wna to get close to me." She replied with a smile.

"Kimmy, your pushing it. But fine, be back by nine sharp or you are grounded for life." Kimmy hugged her mom and ran outside grabbing Camo's leash.

"Your the best!" She yelled back as she took off towards the park Camo pulling her behind him.



****didn't have anythign else to put. Hope this works****

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Kaku~

"Well who ever unsealed us must be plaining something big" Kaku says looking at every one. "So who are we missing?" asked Kaku

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