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PostPosted: Thu Jul 10, 2008 4:41 pm    Post subject: best reviews Reply with quote
I'm sorry to fun4eva -- I went had school the next day and forgot to check in here!

Anyway, what i will critique:
Poetry
Art
Fantasy, on the shorter side (If they are ridiculously long i won't have time to do it, I really wont.)


What i specialize in
Dialougue
Emotion
Fantasy
Structure

I'm looking to help! Instructor▬ship would be nice after a couple months of good crits too. Embarassed

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PostPosted: Thu Jul 10, 2008 7:25 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
*Moved to "Review for Food"*

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PostPosted: Sat Jul 12, 2008 4:17 am    Post subject: Reply with quote
will you reveiw

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PostPosted: Sat Jul 12, 2008 1:31 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
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PostPosted: Sun Jul 13, 2008 5:36 am    Post subject: Reply with quote
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I have just posted this and wondered if I could get some reviews?

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PostPosted: Sun Jul 13, 2008 5:44 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
done jared, it was great!!!!!!!

next???

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ah hem *clears throat*, i said next!
.............. please Very Happy

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PostPosted: Tue Jul 15, 2008 11:57 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
people!, i need things to critique, please

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^If you manage to review that today, I will be your bestest friend ever. Very Happy But whenever you get to it is fine too. =P Thanks in advance!

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PostPosted: Fri Jul 18, 2008 12:57 am    Post subject: Reply with quote
done and done

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