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Alice
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 Posted: Sun Jul 20, 2008 1:31 am Post subject: Alice's Critique Shop |
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The grand opening of Alice's critique shop!
I'm good for every kind writing except poetry. You don't want me wasting your space with poetry I'm no good at it. I'm not even that fond of poetry. But I will read and critique to the best of my abilities, and if I like it particularly I will pester you to write more of it if it's a part/chapter thing. |
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Prokaryote
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dreamintechnicolour
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| Posted: Sun Aug 10, 2008 6:15 am Post subject: |
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Could you critique my short story Grace Under Pressure for me? http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/post407855.html#407855
I've come to a toal dead end with the editing of it. Basically I just need someone to either say "give up now, delete it and pretend it never happened" or " it could be good, just fix..."
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| Posted: Sat Aug 16, 2008 2:28 pm Post subject: |
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The Fragrance of the Perfect Lie
It's a Twilight *Post-Eclipse* fanfic (I'd love to know what I need to improve on with this story) |
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| Posted: Mon Aug 18, 2008 1:40 am Post subject: |
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Alice dear, since I know how it feels to not get any participants in a Will Review For Food topic... ahem... I shall help you out!
I'd very much love you if you'd crit this. You can read the parts in any particular order, though there is only three at the moment. It's for Cal's Some Kind of Character Contest.
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| Posted: Sat Aug 23, 2008 8:26 pm Post subject: |
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Hi, Alice!
Could you (maybe, possibly) write a review for the third chapter of my novel? I'd love any and all opinions on it. 
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/post415975.html
It's listed in action/adventure, though the adventure's only beginning. Thank you!
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scasha
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| Posted: Fri Aug 29, 2008 2:41 am Post subject: |
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Hey I was wondering if you could critique my short story My Missing Half?
Thanks!
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Tabithalillian
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| Posted: Tue Sep 02, 2008 11:59 pm Post subject: |
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ok, please review my two storys, one may be a short story and one is a work in progress and much longer. . .here are the links both a romantic vampire fiction and I am trying to break free fromt he twilight mold with both of them:
A Bloodied Rose:
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic35039.html
My Take On Phantom Of The Opera:
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic35505.html |
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