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myfreindsavamp
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myfreindsavamp
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| It's real good. No mistakes that I can see, and you conveyed the characters' feelings well. |
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myfreindsavamp
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| Posted: Mon Oct 27, 2008 12:36 pm Post subject: |
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| From what I can read here, your story seems to have a great idea. It's unique, and the characters seem dynamic and able to convey feelings well in a refreshing manner. Your characters are not at all lifeless dolls. It's nice. |
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| It was a good read... cool. |
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