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Posted: Sat Aug 16, 2008 12:44 am Post subject:

Wow, this is really good. I'm not really sure if my opinion counts because I haven't written much, but this is really good. You should definitely finish it, I love it. I don't really get how the first little paragraph about the night blends into the Sira story other that that it's nighttime but I suppose you will get to that later in the story. Keep writing!

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