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BigBadBear
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Posted: Thu Sep 18, 2008 9:41 pm Post subject: Message Contest [RESULTS ARE POSTED] |
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The results are in! Congrats to everyone!
Runner up is: Adnamarie!
Third Place: Black Cat Sachiko!
Second Place: Chocoholic!
First Place: Snoink!
Alright, I graded this contest by grading it, so it wasn't purely my choice on who won. I made it fair. Here is how I graded.
Characterization: _/10
Plot Idea: _/10
Spelling and Grammar: _/10
‘Cool’ meter: _/10
Overall: _/50.
It's pretty self explanatory. If you guys have any questions, PM me! I'll be PMing the winners.
Congrats, all!
-Jared
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This contest is going to help you learn to write in a different style. I have written an example of this contest already. Here's what to do, the rules, prizes, deadlines and such.
YOUR OBJECTIVE
You have to write a story using only letters, messages, notes, texts and ect. You absolutely cannot use dialog. As in speaking. In the example I have up there, I have a man talking into a voice message. Like this:
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Holly: Hi. This is Holly Forester. Sorry, I can’t come to the phone right now. Please leave your name, number, and a short message and I’ll get back to you as soon as I can.
Percy: Holly… pick up the phone. Please… where are you? Please, please, please call me back when you get this message. I’ve tried calling your cell six times. You won’t answer. Please. Pick up the phone. Please. Holly… Where are you? I need you. I need you back home. Please come home. Where are you? Where are – |
This is acceptable. What I'm trying to get out is that you can't have two characters talking directly to each other. Take for instance, a phone call. Two characters cannot directly talk to each other. You may use an sort of message you can think of. Just be creative.
RULES
1) You may not use dialog (as stated above)
2) You must include at least one email in your post. For an example of how to set one up, please click on the example above.
3) Have a whole bunch of fun. The possibilities are endless.
PRIZES
1st place will receive 5 critiques, or 250 points (the equivalent of 5 critiques).
2nd place will receive 3 critiques, or 150 points (the equivalent of 3 critiques).
3rd place will receive 1 critique, or 50 points (the equivalent of 1 critique).
If more than 3 people will enter, there will be an Honorable Mention.
If you enter, also, you will receive a critique from me on the piece you enter.
DEADLINES
9/18 - 10/8
AND SUCH
Have tons of fun. I can't wait to read everything.
-Jared
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Angel of Death
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Posted: Thu Sep 18, 2008 10:25 pm Post subject: |
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Ooh I know I shouldn't be doing this but I got to enter this! I was just thinking of writing a piece differently and here you are with my opportunity. How can I pass this up? I don't know because I can't so expect something from me.
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Black Cat Sachiko
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Posted: Fri Sep 19, 2008 10:52 pm Post subject: |
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Entry posted:
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic36228.html |
_________________ Suzanne says:
If I do not write 75 thousand words in the month of November, which is 30 days long, I vow to wear a sign which reads "I LOVE EDWARD CULLEN" in big, bright letters around my neck for a whole day.
It begins. >:] |
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BigBadBear
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BigBadBear
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chocoholic
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Posted: Tue Sep 23, 2008 11:11 am Post subject: |
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I wrote one! Which is actually kind of amazing, because I wrote it in one and I'm actually getting to enter this, which doesn't usually happen. You should feel very special right now.
Memos of Bleeding Hearts
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Adnamarine
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Posted: Wed Sep 24, 2008 2:07 pm Post subject: |
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I'm gonna enter JareBaer! I already have most of my entry written, so expect to see it soon! Just not too soon...
This was an awesome idea.  |
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BigBadBear
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Posted: Fri Sep 26, 2008 4:06 pm Post subject: |
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Awesome. Thanks everyone. Is there anyone else interested in this contest? I have three (3) entries. Black Cat Sachiko, chocoholic and Snoink. But Snoink never posted in this thread, so I'm not sure if she meant it to be an entry? If so, Snoink, please say so here.
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BigBadBear
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Adnamarine
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Posted: Sat Oct 04, 2008 5:39 pm Post subject: |
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My entry!!!!
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic36808.html |
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BigBadBear
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Posted: Thu Oct 09, 2008 3:24 am Post subject: |
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CLOSED.
Sam, Snoink, if you still plan on entering this contest, (cause it's already posted) please say so in this thread!! Sam, even though your story isn't complete, I'll still accept it.
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Kyte
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Posted: Fri Oct 10, 2008 8:41 pm Post subject: |
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| I has question. Are you allowed to add a little exposition between notes, or is it just notes? |
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