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my love

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fallsforyoueasily   View This User's Portfolio
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PostPosted: Sun Oct 05, 2008 4:07 pm    Post subject: my love Reply with quote

When everything starts to fall apart

And everything is going dark

I know that you will always be there and nothing can go wrong





We might fight but we will still come back around

We will have to learn to settle with the things we don't like

We'll have our obstacles, but we'll make it through





When things are wrong and we're at our low

We will run away and never let go

Hand in hand, arm in arm, and hearts as one 





I look in your eyes and I don't only see the face of a angel 

But the heart of gold that I have stole 

And won over fair and square





When I see that you are next to me 

And then I know we were always meant to be

I will always love the way that you love me 





I know I was put here just for you

I know we are together for a reason

I know that everything will come out good





I give you all I can and all I have

I know I'm not the prettiest girl in the world

But I am your biggest fan
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PostPosted: Mon Oct 06, 2008 1:58 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

This was cute.

I would like to tell you that we have a 2:1 polocy. Basically you have to have 2 reviews for every one poem or story. So, while I like you poem, you need to review. Because I saw from your portfolio that you have posted several peices of work. Keep posting, just try to keep the rules in mind.

I don't know if you knew that seeing how you seem to be knew here, but now you do so get to reviewing!Smile

But, have fun too.Smile
First to review!!!!! Very Happy Very Happy Very Happy
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