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 Posted: Tue Oct 07, 2008 1:35 pm Post subject: First Kiss |
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Ok, this competition is relatively simple, all you have to do is either write a short story, a poem or draw/paint/make a picture of a first kiss. It can be anything you want, two young kids playing a dare game, two teenagers, or two old folks kissing on there 50th anniversary - i don't mind. You could even write about YOUR first kiss. This gives you a lot of freedom to do what you want so it will be fun  You could also do some fan fiction if you want, you could think of your favourite book and rewrite some parts or draw what Edward and Bella might look like on their first kiss  i don't mind, have fun with it and enjoy!
Prizes
1st place - 3 reviews and 100 points
2nd Place - 2 reviews and 75 points
3rd place - 1 review and 50 points
And for all the rest of you who have entered you each get one review on your chosen work
Deadline - October the 20th, (extended to the 25th) its not very long so if you are going to make a massive painting or something start now The deadline can be extended if you wish, just pm me
Rules
You can used a piece of work you have already written/drawn whatever
Don't ALL used Edward and Bells first kiss for your inspiration - its ok for a few but not everyone!
No minimal words, but if you are going to post a picture make it small enough for everyone to see
You can make it as weird or romantic as you want, but it doesn't have to be romantic if you dont want it to be
You can enter more than one, but the limit is three
If you have any other questions PM me, you can either post them on here or PM it to me but it would be great if we could all see your great work!
Good luck everyone!
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| Posted: Tue Oct 07, 2008 3:52 pm Post subject: |
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| im in. =]]
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| Posted: Tue Oct 07, 2008 4:56 pm Post subject: |
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I'm sad now.....I've never been kissed. 
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| Posted: Tue Oct 07, 2008 5:10 pm Post subject: :P |
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| Dont worry about it, you could write about that if you want, i suppose it doesnt have to be an actual kiss - this contest is free so you can basically do what you want
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| Posted: Tue Oct 07, 2008 5:34 pm Post subject: |
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Ok then here is mine....I guess I ll just pretend like Im getting my first kiss....
"Shannon?"
Shannon turned around to glare at Mark, tears streamiong down her face. After being rejected by Sam, she didn't want to bothered by anyone.
"Shannon, are you alright?" Mark took a step closer, standing a few inches away from her. "I seen you run out of teh building crying and I thougth someone had hurt you." Mark seemed furious at teh idea of her being hurt.
"It's nothing Mark. I...I just got...," she didn't finish, just ran into Marks' arms and cried.
His arms wrapped around her. Hm. She fits perfectly. Mark thought, squeezing her tighter. I wonder what she'd do if I... He didn't finish, just lifted her chin and lowered his mouth to hers. The chemistry ignited was like teh ifres blazign in hell. He burnt up just being around her. Her mouth opened to his, welcoming him, beckoning him.
"Oh..Mark..." She threw her arms around his neck as she pressed herself closer to him... and to his heart.
So this is love?
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| Posted: Wed Oct 08, 2008 12:40 am Post subject: |
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| Er... Well I wrote one that sort of ended up half based on this contest and half on another...Can I submit to both? xD
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| Posted: Wed Oct 08, 2008 2:19 am Post subject: |
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| Hmm...I'm very interested in this. There is no limit on how much you can write, correct?
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| Posted: Wed Oct 08, 2008 2:25 am Post subject: |
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Ok then here is mine....I guess I ll just pretend like Im getting my first kiss....
"Shannon?"
Shannon turned around to glare at Mark, tears streamiong down her face. After being rejected by Sam, she didn't want to bothered by anyone.
"Shannon, are you alright?" Mark took a step closer, standing a few inches away from her. "I seen you run out of teh building crying and I thougth someone had hurt you." Mark seemed furious at teh idea of her being hurt.
"It's nothing Mark. I...I just got...," she didn't finish, just ran into Marks' arms and cried.
His arms wrapped around her. Hm. She fits perfectly. Mark thought, squeezing her tighter. I wonder what she'd do if I... He didn't finish, just lifted her chin and lowered his mouth to hers. The chemistry ignited was like teh ifres blazign in hell. He burnt up just being around her. Her mouth opened to his, welcoming him, beckoning him.
"Oh..Mark..." She threw her arms around his neck as she pressed herself closer to him... and to his heart.
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Oh my god, this is bizarre! I was reading this, and saw that you had never been kissed, so I was about to reply with a me too (romantically challenged for the win!) and then you're characters name is Shannon... and that's mine name! I think we're connected! haha.
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| Posted: Wed Oct 08, 2008 8:11 am Post subject: :P |
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| You can submit more than one but the limit is three im afraid, and there is no minimal words but try not to make it too long - good luck everyone!
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| Posted: Wed Oct 08, 2008 4:28 pm Post subject: |
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o_O. Are you serious? That is soooo weird. I couldn't think of a name so I got frustrated over it, and then it just popped into my head. oh well, hey Grace? Can I post another one? Here it is. If not let me know and I'll delete it. XD.
Oh yeah I sorta took a different turn with the first kiss thing. instead of it being all romantic, its difefrent. read it and tell me what you think. XD.
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Sissy let an exasperated breath out as she shut the door behind her with a satisfying clunk. No way was she ever going to go back out with Jared again. After 4 months, Jared had decided to take it to the next level. Or so he thought. Her heart beagn to race as she remebered that horrible moment when he had tried to force her.
"Now Sissy. I've been a good boy and I think that I should be rewarded. You didn't think I'd stick around if I knew I wasn't going to get a piece of it, did you?" He let out a furious laugh, as he crept closer. At 18, he was the hottest guy in school. She herself was only 16. When he had asked her out the first time, her heart had raced because he was so cute. What do I do? she asked hersel over and over again. She had finally agreed when he asked a second time, reasuring herself that he was a nice guy. How wrong she had been.
He had crept closer to her, backing her into a wall. "No, Jared. You don't deserve a reward," she said, spitting reawrd out disdainfully. "What you need is some manners."
The fury that flashed in his face was enough to make her tremble.
"I will get a reward, now quit being such a pussy adn let me have some." He pressed his body up to hers, allowing her to knwo exactly what he meant.
She shook her head from side to side. "No. No. No." She wasn't ready.
He only laughed, lowering his mouth to press it roughly against hers. His hands gripped her shoulders as he held her in place. With way to escape, she used the only defense she had learned. Ty-kwon-do. Getting her hands free she clawed at his face and waited. Finally, he grabbed his face. That's when she went in for the attack. Grabbign him by the ears she pulled his face down to meet her knee, then took off running towards her house, a block away. No way was she going to be a victom. So much for true loves first kiss huh?
A tear ran down Sissys' face as she walked into the bathroom, where her mom was.
"Mom? I need to tell you something." She closed the door, ready totell her mom the whole story about what had happened.
*XD. Sorry for the length.":
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My heart almost ripped a hole in my chest. The pace at which it was beating now was so fast I couldn't even keep track of the beats. The only thing that separated me and Kristi were the doors leading into the school. Butterflies flapped in my stomach, searching for an escape. Silver doors crept nearer and nearer. A bead of sweat rolled down my face. My insides felt as if they would burst at any moment. My breathing became shaky, taking in ten breaths instead of one.
Now, the steps leading to the doors were my biggest obstacle. I wasn't sure if I'd make it up them; I was shaking like someone having a seizure. Taking a deep breath, I climbed the steps very slowly, counting "One Mississippi," between each step. When I reached the doors, I inhaled deeply and pushed them open.
This is it. My eyes scanned a diversity of people until our eyes locked. Kristi was standing about ten feet away. Pausing for a second, we just stared at each other. I was sure she was feeling the same way. While I was walking towards her, the butterflies flapped even harder. My heard pounded faster. As I approached her, we both forced a nervous smile. It was mutual, we were both nervous as hell.
I stopped about a foot away from her. All I could push myself to say was "Hi." She ignored it. She stepped closer. Standing on her tippy-toes, she put her arms around my neck. We were now face to face; there was no denying the fact that it was going to happen right there, right then.
She did it. It was the most wonderful thing I've ever experienced in my whole life. The butterflies finally found an escape, my heart beat slowed down, my breath was now steady; and most of all, it was over with. My first kiss was now over. A sigh of relief caught both of our breath. I couldn't control myself, I kissed her again. We both laughed and hugged each other for what seemed like a decade.
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| Posted: Thu Oct 09, 2008 1:51 pm Post subject: |
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| o_O Did that really happen. Oh how romantic. *melts*
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| Posted: Thu Oct 09, 2008 2:03 pm Post subject: :P |
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| Wow these are all great! keep 'em comin'
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