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Thu Jun 14, 2012 1:01 am
Dreamwalker says...



That's the basic explanation. I give the reviews a quick skim over and decide how many points they earn based on length and quality. I'll admit length is the biggest factor, mostly because I don't want to read every review all the way through. But if something grabs my eye, I'll let myself be swayed by quality as well.


Oh, okay! Didn't know if there was any specific ranking or not. I'll have to make my reviews a little longer then ;)
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Thu Jun 14, 2012 7:58 pm
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Day Four!

The Sirens have pulled into an even stronger lead and are leaving the flyers behind! It's a close race between the other three teams with Griffins barely escaping the flames from the Phoenix's mouths and at the back of the pack, the Gargoyles are ruffling a few Phoenix feathers. But it's all still to play for so get out there and review!

Team Rankings

1. Team Siren | 38.13
2. Team Griffin | 26.79
3. Team Phoenix | 25.63
4. Team Gargoyle | 22.86

Top Five Reviewers

1. Rydia | 14 reviews | 175 points
2. barefootrunner | 14 reviews | 155 points
3. alliyah | 13 reviews | 125 points
4. Dreamwalker | 8 reviews | 105 points
5. Audy | 7 reviews | 95 points

1. Team Gargoyle

1. Rydia | 14 reviews | 175 points
2. Lumi | 1 review | 15 points
3. Justagirl |
4. Lauren2010 | 2 reviews | 25 points
5. Karzkin | 3 reviews | 30 points
6. Meshugenah | 1 review | 10 points
7. MiRaCLeS | 2 reviews | 20 points
8. ItalianIlluminist |
9. Jas |
10. xXTheBlackSheepXx |
11. Graffiti Artist |
12. Carlito | 4 reviews | 60 points
13. lilymoore | 2 reviews | 30 points
14. eyeofthestorm |
15. PatriciaTina | 2 reviews | 25 points
16. mithrim96 |
17. purpleandblue22 | 5 reviews | 40 points
18. IcyFlame |
19. ERZA | 6 reviews | 30 points
20. PenguinAttack | 2 reviws | 20 points
21. Silverdragon150 |

Team Score: 22.86

2. Team Siren

1. Dreamwalker | 8 reviews | 105 points
2. TheDayBeforeTomorrow | 8 reviews | 90 points
3. ChocoCookie | 1 review | 10 points
4. DevanEWilliams | 1 review | 10 points
5. Demeter | 1 review | 10 points
6. zohali93 | 4 reviews | 45 points
7. StellaThomas | 3 reviews | 35 points
8. Tsukarin |

Team Score: 38.13

3. Team Phoenix

1. DragonGirl11 | 1 review | 10 points
2. SirTobes |
3. artsy |
4. Niebla |
5. Crow29 |
6. noninjapresent |
7. tgirly | 10 reviews | 70 points
8. FakeCrow |
9. fireheartedkaratepup |
10. VolfnessWhiter |
11. Audy | 7 reviews | 95 points
12. laylaflame | 7 reviews | 80 points
13. barefootrunner | 14 reviews | 155 points
14. ShadowVyper |
15. DarknecrosisX |
16. reason |

Team Score: 25.63

4. Team Griffin

1. murtuza | 3 reviews | 45 points
2. Shearwater |
3. alfredsymon | 4 reviews | 45 points
4. Lavvie | 2 reviews | 20 points
5. alliyah | 13 reviews | 125 points
6. Cole |
7. Threnody | 5 reviews | 55 points
8. Shinobiinfinity |
9. Nargles | 5 reviews | 35 points
10. xXmusicaXx |
11. anna91423 | 3 reviews | 30 points
12. Ktg17 | 2 reviews | 20 points
13. Snoink |
14. Griffinkeeper |

Team Score: 26.79
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Thu Jun 14, 2012 11:10 pm
fireheartedkaratepup says...



H'okay. I've been fairly useless thus far, but I've got my reviewing shoes on now, and I'm ready to roll.

Those of you who haven't done any reviews yet, don't be discouraged! The ones who have already been reviewing are surely tired by now, (;3) so it's the perfect time to catch up!

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Fri Jun 15, 2012 7:52 am
Tsukarin says...



My apologies again.
Last edited by Tsukarin on Fri Jun 15, 2012 2:05 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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Fri Jun 15, 2012 9:12 am
Rydia says...



You both need to post in the revieww catalogue, not here. Don't confuse me please! :?
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Fri Jun 15, 2012 9:55 am
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My apologies, I will correct my mistake asap.
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Fri Jun 15, 2012 7:57 pm
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Day Five!

After today I'm going to remove the non-participants from the listings. If you're one of those and you do decide to post a few reviews for the last day of the contest, don't worry as I'll just add you right back in!

Can nobody take down those sirens? There they go, I am so impressed, I might just have to marry the whole lot of them! Nothing to do with their alluring good looks or excellent charm of course, *ahem*. Anyway, the Griffins are still maintaining their noble second but have not yet moved out of range of the Phoenixes' flame and those Gargoyles are plotting something, I'm certain of it. There's no other explanation for their continuing last place position.

Team Rankings

1. Team Siren | 56.88
2. Team Griffin | 35.36
3. Team Phoenix | 33.13
4. Team Gargoyle | 28.57

Top Ten Reviewers

1. Rydia | 18 reviews | 225 points
2. barefootrunner | 19 reviews | 215 points
3. alliyah | 17 reviews | 160 points
4. TheDayBeforeTomorrow | 11 reviews | 120 points
5. Dreamwalker | 8 reviews | 105 points
6. Audy | 7 reviews | 95 points
6. laylaflame | 10 reviews | 95 points
8. zohali93 | 8 reviews | 90 points
9. tgirly | 10 reviews | 70 points
9. murtuza | 5 reviews | 70 points

1. Team Gargoyle

1. Rydia | 18 reviews | 225 points
2. Lumi | 1 review | 15 points
3. Justagirl |
4. Lauren2010 | 2 reviews | 25 points
5. Karzkin | 3 reviews | 30 points
6. Meshugenah | 1 review | 10 points
7. MiRaCLeS | 2 reviews | 20 points
8. ItalianIlluminist |
9. Jas |
10. xXTheBlackSheepXx |
11. Graffiti Artist |
12. Carlito | 4 reviews | 60 points
13. lilymoore | 2 reviews | 30 points
14. eyeofthestorm | 3 reviews | 20 points
15. PatriciaTina | 2 reviews | 25 points
16. mithrim96 |
17. purpleandblue22 | 5 reviews | 40 points
18. IcyFlame |
19. ERZA | 11 reviews | 55 points
20. PenguinAttack | 4 reviews | 45 points
21. Silverdragon150 |

Team Score: 28.57

2. Team Siren

1. Dreamwalker | 8 reviews | 105 points
2. TheDayBeforeTomorrow | 11 reviews | 120 points
3. ChocoCookie | 4 reviews | 50 points
4. DevanEWilliams | 2 reviews | 25 points
5. Demeter | 1 review | 10 points
6. zohali93 | 8 reviews | 90 points
7. StellaThomas | 3 reviews | 35 points
8. Tsukarin | 2 reviws | 20 points

Team Score: 56.88

3. Team Phoenix

1. DragonGirl11 | 2 reviews | 20 points
2. SirTobes |
3. artsy |
4. Niebla |
5. Crow29 |
6. noninjapresent |
7. tgirly | 10 reviews | 70 points
8. FakeCrow |
9. fireheartedkaratepup | 1 review | 10 points
10. VolfnessWhiter |
11. Audy | 7 reviews | 95 points
12. laylaflame | 10 reviews | 95 points
13. barefootrunner | 19 reviews | 215 points
14. ShadowVyper | 2 reviews | 25 points
15. DarknecrosisX |
16. reason |

Team Score: 33.13

4. Team Griffin

1. murtuza | 5 reviews | 70 points
2. Shearwater | 5 reviews | 60 points
3. alfredsymon | 4 reviews | 45 points
4. Lavvie | 2 reviews | 20 points
5. alliyah | 17 reviews | 160 points
6. Cole |
7. Threnody | 5 reviews | 55 points
8. Shinobiinfinity |
9. Nargles | 5 reviews | 35 points
10. xXmusicaXx |
11. anna91423 | 3 reviews | 30 points
12. Ktg17 | 2 reviews | 20 points
13. Snoink |
14. Griffinkeeper |

Team Score: 35.36
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Sat Jun 16, 2012 2:12 pm
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It's midnight for the 17th at the moment. Internets back up after being down for several days so I might be able to sneak two in tomorrow.
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Sat Jun 16, 2012 6:14 pm
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Oh God! I totally forgot tomorrow is 17th!

*Runs off to review harder*
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Sun Jun 17, 2012 11:06 am
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Apologies for the lack of results last night, folks. My internet wass playing up.

Day 7 - morning!

With the non-participants removed from the contest, we have a startling change to the lead! Team Phoenix are now roaring ahead, rising faster and faster on those hot currents. Speaking of currents, Team Siren are still swimming strong and the Griffins are hard on their trail. But just what are those Gargoyles planning? They seem to have paused to have a picnic on top of a snowy mountain, well maybe they're hungry.

Hungry for reviews! There's 13 hours of this contest left, unlucky for some, let's find out who that someone is!

(Honestly guys, you're all doing so well and there's been such a lot of good quality reviews out there, keep it up!)

Team Rankings

1. Team Phoenix | 81.11
2. Team Siren | 68.13
3. Team Griffin | 67.22
4. Team Gargoyle | 51.67

Top Ten Reviewers

1. barefootrunner | 19 reviews | 270 points
2. Rydia | 20 reviews | 250 points
3. alliyah | 17 reviews | 195 points
4. Audy | 12 reviews | 150 points
5. TheDayBeforeTomorrow | 12 reviews | 130 points
6. zohali93 | 10 reviews | 115 points
7. Dreamwalker | 8 reviews | 105 points
8. laylaflame | 10 reviews | 95 points
9. Carlito | 6 reviews | 90 points
9. ERZA | 16 reviews, 4 comments | 90 points

1. Team Gargoyle

1. Rydia | 20 reviews | 250 points
2. Lumi | 1 review | 15 points
3. Lauren2010 | 2 reviews | 25 points
4. Karzkin | 3 reviews | 30 points
5. Meshugenah | 2 reviews | 25 points
6. MiRaCLeS | 4 reviews | 40 points
7. xXTheBlackSheepXx | 3 reviews | 30 points
8. Carlito | 6 reviews | 90 points
9. lilymoore | 2 reviews | 30 points
10. eyeofthestorm | 3 reviews | 20 points
11. PatriciaTina | 2 reviews | 25 points
12. purpleandblue22 | 5 reviews | 40 points
13. IcyFlame | 2 reviews | 20 points
14. ERZA | 16 reviews, 4 comments | 90 points
15. PenguinAttack | 4 reviews | 45 points

Team Score: 51.67

2. Team Siren

1. Dreamwalker | 8 reviews | 105 points
2. TheDayBeforeTomorrow | 12 reviews | 130 points
3. ChocoCookie | 7 reviews | 85 points
4. DevanEWilliams | 2 reviews | 25 points
5. Demeter | 1 review | 10 points
6. zohali93 | 10 reviews | 115 points
7. StellaThomas | 5 reviews | 55 points
8. Tsukarin | 2 reviws | 20 points

Team Score: 68.13

3. Team Phoenix

1. DragonGirl11 | 3 reviews | 30 points
2. Niebla | 2 reviews | 30 points
3. tgirly | 11 reviews | 85 points
4. fireheartedkaratepup | 1 review | 10 points
5. Audy | 12 reviews | 150 points
6. laylaflame | 10 reviews | 95 points
7. barefootrunner | 24 reviews | 270 points
8. ShadowVyper | 3 reviews | 35 points
9. reason | 2 reviews | 25 points

Team Score: 81.11

4. Team Griffin

1. murtuza | 6 reviews | 85 points
2. Shearwater | 5 reviews | 60 points
3. alfredsymon | 7 reviews | 85 points
4. Lavvie | 2 reviews | 20 points
5. alliyah | 20 reviews | 195 points
6. Threnody | 5 reviews | 55 points
7. Nargles | 6 reviews, 2 comments | 45 points
8. anna91423 | 3 reviews | 30 points
9. Ktg17 | 3 reviews | 30 points

Team Score: 67.22
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Sun Jun 17, 2012 4:19 pm
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Woohoo! Keep up with the reviewing everybody! :D
  





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Sun Jun 17, 2012 7:28 pm
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I.... I thought this /was/ the review catalogue...sorry.
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Just a quick note: a few people linked reviews written after 12:00pm GMT so I wasn't able to count those (though I did give a ten minute allowance so anything up to 12:10pm has been allowed).

Final Results!

It's been an amazing week and I'm so pleased with every person who took part. You've all done a great job and your reviews make YWS the amazing site that it is so you should all be very proud of yourself. There are some really happy writers out there this week. Whether your team won or not, well done! (But of course we all want to see who won :wink:)

Also Total Reviews= 260! That's very cool 8)

What's this? Team Phoenix appear to be turning around, they are, they are flying backwards! I don't under- oh, it appears that another phoenix has joined the race and they are flying back to meet them, bravo! That's teamwork for you, but will it cost them the lead? No, no it won't. The sirens make a last push but those pretty ladies will have to be content with their shiny second.

Not much is happening at the back of the pack. The Griffins have stopped moving, I think they've given up and the Gargoyles have packed away their picnic but it's too late. Whatever mischief they were planning, I guess we'll never know.

Congratulations Team Phoenix! Great challenge, everyone <3

Team Rankings

1. Team Phoenix | 79.5
2. Team Siren | 76.88
3. Team Griffin | 67.22
4. Team Gargoyle | 53.67

Top Ten Reviewers

1. barefootrunner | 26 reviews | 290 points
2. Rydia | 21 reviews | 260 points
3. alliyah | 17 reviews | 195 points
4. Audy | 14 reviews | 180 points
5. zohali93 | 13 reviews | 145 points
6. TheDayBeforeTomorrow | 12 reviews | 130 points
7. Dreamwalker | 8 reviews | 105 points
8. ChocoCookie | 8 reviews | 100 points
9. laylaflame | 10 reviews | 95 points
10. Carlito | 6 reviews | 90 points
10. ERZA | 16 reviews, 4 comments | 90 points

1. Team Gargoyle

1. Rydia | 21 reviews | 260 points
2. Lumi | 1 review | 15 points
3. Lauren2010 | 2 reviews | 25 points
4. Karzkin | 3 reviews | 30 points
5. Meshugenah | 3 reviews | 35 points
6. MiRaCLeS | 4 reviews | 40 points
7. xXTheBlackSheepXx | 3 reviews | 30 points
8. Carlito | 6 reviews | 90 points
9. lilymoore | 2 reviews | 30 points
10. eyeofthestorm | 3 reviews | 20 points
11. PatriciaTina | 2 reviews | 25 points
12. purpleandblue22 | 5 reviews | 40 points
13. IcyFlame | 3 reviews | 30 points
14. ERZA | 16 reviews, 4 comments | 90 points
15. PenguinAttack | 4 reviews | 45 points

Team Score: 53.67

2. Team Siren

1. Dreamwalker | 8 reviews | 105 points
2. TheDayBeforeTomorrow | 12 reviews | 130 points
3. ChocoCookie | 8 reviews | 100 points
4. DevanEWilliams | 3 reviews | 50 points
5. Demeter | 1 review | 10 points
6. zohali93 | 13 reviews | 145 points
7. StellaThomas | 5 reviews | 55 points
8. Tsukarin | 2 reviws | 20 points

Team Score: 76.88

3. Team Phoenix

1. DragonGirl11 | 3 reviews | 30 points
2. Niebla | 2 reviews | 30 points
3. tgirly | 11 reviews | 85 points
4. fireheartedkaratepup | 1 review | 10 points
5. Audy | 14 reviews | 180 points
6. laylaflame | 10 reviews | 95 points
7. barefootrunner | 26 reviews | 290 points
8. ShadowVyper | 3 reviews | 35 points
9. reason | 2 reviews | 25 points
10. noninjapresent | 1 review | 15 points

Team Score: 79.5

4. Team Griffin

1. murtuza | 6 reviews | 85 points
2. Shearwater | 5 reviews | 60 points
3. alfredsymon | 7 reviews | 85 points
4. Lavvie | 2 reviews | 20 points
5. alliyah | 20 reviews | 195 points
6. Threnody | 5 reviews | 55 points
7. Nargles | 6 reviews, 2 comments | 45 points
8. anna91423 | 3 reviews | 30 points
9. Ktg17 | 3 reviews | 30 points

Team Score: 67.22
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