I have just had one of the moments where you come up with a great idea for a book. I have a few things written down, and I would like to share them with you.
This is my first attempt at writing a fantasy, and I think that this plot has never been done before in the history of...history! Well, any comments, advice or pretty much anything to help me out would be much appreciated!
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Arnold Jackson, a black African American, dreams in his youth of a fantasy land named Freedom. Inside, twelve year old Lyre shows him around and tells him about the great king that restored peace to this once so horrible land. Freedom, currently was a beautiful land where one would love to live. Arnold (eight years old) dreams every night and goes back to discover magic, peace and most of all, non-prestigious people.
The year is [s]1921[/s] (see EDIT). Jackson and his family are going through trials with being black. His father can't get a job and his mother is deadly sick. The only place that Jackson can find happiness in is Freedom, where he isn't persecuted for being black.
Until he grows up, of course. He soon forgets about Lyre and Freedom and begins to face reality: WWII. He is recruited to be a kitchen boy in a battle station in Hawaii. He is located in Pearl Harbor. White men prosecute him and thrown snide comments about Jackson.
And then the Japanese bomb Pearl Harbor and Jackson is thrown overboard, into the chaos of the world. He wakes up to find himself in Freedom, the once fantasy land, but now it was real. There was only a few things different: the good king had died and was replaced with an evil king, one who sought to destroy any "Savior of the land". Freedom soon meets up with Lyre and is totally shocked to find out that everyone in the land of Freedom was dead. Including Jackson himself.
Lyre tells Jackson that he has been the only live entity that has entered Freedom. Of course, Jackson was dead, but a few years ago, when he was eight, he had visited Freedom. Lyre discovered that Jackson was supposed so free the people from Freedom so that they could free themselves from being bound in the land.
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Ugh! Now that I write all of that down it seems so...so not thought out. Oh well. If any of you want to leave comments or anything, they would be much appreciated. Again, this is my first attempt at fantasy, so if anything doesn't seem...right, please tell me.
Thanks!
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[EDIT] I changed the year. It is really [s]1928.[/s] I think I'm going to change the year to 1930-31. Depends. If you guys can give me any feedback, it would be much appreciated.
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