Young Writers Society

Just to let you know, I'm only suggesting that you should try using extended metaphors as you seem to be the person that uses metaphors quite a bit. Don't be under the impression that I'm demanding you to do it lol.

"pats wolf"

Andy.

Yes, but extended metaphors are so cool! I think that, as you said, they would give my writing more depth.

Anyways. Story updates and such:
I have decided to keep her eyes as a gold-brown colour, due to her wolfishness. The plot won't revolve around it or anything silly like that but I think it works, seeing as she spends lots of time with wolves. I did some more sketches for her and I think I've decided on a physical appearance. Next up: personality fleshing-out-ness. Fun!

Wednesday Mach the 11th, 2008

Okay. So, I've decided to re-write my prologue. As in, completely different ideas. Except for the first part, the bit in italics. Si far, I have one sentence: Swift black water rushed by, rolling and knotting like muscle as it slid over rocks and around bends. I am SO lame.

And that's it for updates, everyone!