OK, I had this idea for a video game once, but I'm thinking of making it into a novel. Here goes...
Plot:The world is divided into two peoples: the magus (who can wield the natural forces to do they're bidding, like being able to teleport and go invisible) and the BWO, or better world organization, who despise all things unnatural and use the highest pinnacle of technology. The story starts with the BWO sending a large army to a magus town, as part of a huge offensive. It ends in huge disaster; almost everyone is destroyed. A young apprentice enginer survives, and teams up with a young girl, part of the Magus (but he doesn't know). Together, they make it to a desert town (with no alliance). But, when the guy realizes he's traveled with a Magus, he stabs her at night. The gods punish him for what he did, and he ends up in limbo with the girl. Together they escape, and work to stop the fighting of BWO and the Magus.
I haven't worked out the kinks yet, but I plan to have a lot of action, unique magic and technology, and a lot of interesting settings (mostly in limbo).
Please, tell what what you like and what you hate, and feel free to give some more ideas. I really need everyone's help to make this story awesome.
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