Okay, I'm not sure if some of you have seen my Poisoned Roses story posted in Romantic Fiction, but that's where it has been.
Now, however, since I'm trying to get more serious about my writing, I need some real honest opinions. I have been seriously considering even abandoning this idea. So please, give me the harshest (or the nicest whichever you prefer) that you can give
Thanks!
Summary
This is the tale of a young female vampire apart of a clan who doesn't follow normal vampire tradition and feeds only on animals. Her name is Sophia Martin and on her first day back from a Winter Break, she meets a young male human named Isaac Ligaroti. He is instantly interested in Sophia. No, not because of her beauty (she is not one of the Blessed) but because there is something about her, some mystery surrounding her that he wishes to solve.
This is their love story.
WARNING! I have decided to do a complete rewrite of this story so please, do not critique! I don't want you guys to waste your time when I'm not going to be going back to this. I should be posting the rewrite of it shortly. Thank you
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