Young Writers Society

Cute cute cute, Jabber! Nice and light, not like some poetry (I'm such a hypocrite, just posted like the saddest poem I've written... well, sad for me...). I really enjoyed it, and it leaves me with a strong sense of satisfaction. Nice work!

Hey, Jabber! Nice poem! It felt like I was reading Robert Frost! I liked how you were writing a poem about how you didn't know what to write about. You have TALENT! *sings Broadway*

I won't even bother denying the fact that you got me to smile from beginning to end, and I even laughed in some parts. This is so awesome. I remember when I first started writing poetry, this is exactly how I felt too. The only difference is that you're skilled enough to actually write it all down. Great poem, definitely enjoyed this. Keep it up!

JABBERRRRRRRR!

Well hi! I'm not sure you'll ever get this comment because its the last of many. I know you wrote this poem years ago... but thats just what I do. I dig up ancient pieces of work and comment... just because I can!

I especially liked this poem. For a first posted poem its really great! The rhyming scheme worked and everything was very well laid out. It was a fun read... and is better than any poem I've ever written. It's a great talent to be able to use rhyming so well... it just doesn't seem to work for me.

I extremely enjoyed this!

Deanie x

Awwww! This was utterly adorable! My first poem read by you and I'm already hooked. Great job!