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Sat Apr 19, 2014 8:08 pm
megsug says...



@Zarhail done. I'm very interested to see where that project goes.
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Mon Apr 28, 2014 1:18 am
megsug says...



@Certainly Love and @joshuapaul are done~

Phew. Anyone else?
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Mon Apr 28, 2014 1:26 am
queerelves says...



Hi! Do you think you could review my piece? Azazel: Prologue
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Mon Apr 28, 2014 12:43 pm
Zarhail says...



@megsug
do you think you could have a look at my fist chapter? All of the other at least in some form written parts are linked should you need them.
Untitled - Chapter 1 - part 1
Untitled - Chapter 1 - part 2
  





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Mon Apr 28, 2014 2:39 pm
asadderandawiserman says...



If you're not too busy, would you mind taking a look at my short story?
Close Your Eyes

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Mon May 05, 2014 1:56 am
megsug says...



@queerelves done. I think we have an interesting start here for anyone who needs a blooming novel to read...
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Tue May 06, 2014 3:37 am
megsug says...



@Zarhail done.
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Wed May 07, 2014 3:40 am
megsug says...



@asadderandawiserman finished~
Fantastic short story if anyone's looking.
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Fri May 09, 2014 7:26 pm
megsug says...



@Ermixon finished~
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Tue May 13, 2014 4:28 pm
DudeMcGuy says...



Hi Megsug,

I have been reading a few of your reviews and I have to say I like what I see. (I'm a picky reviewer myself as well).
I noticed you said that you review individual chapters. Not many reviewers are willing to do that. I posted Ch.9 from my novel about 2 weeks ago and I haven't got any feedback on it yet. Would you take a look at it for me? (I added a very brief plot summary at the beginning).

The Roads of Marceris Ch.9 (1/2)
The Roads of Marceris Ch.9 (2/2)

It's in two parts because it's too long otherwise. Thanks so much and please take your time with it. No rush.
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Sun Jun 15, 2014 8:48 pm
ire123 says...



Can you review the first chapter of my story Unexpected happening?
  





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Mon Jun 16, 2014 4:14 am
megsug says...



Dude done~
@ire123 give me a link please.
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