Ehehehe, I'm super duper nervous but, if you'd like, you can review my first chapter and beyond of Eclipse? I've gotten some reviews on it already but the more feedback I get, the greater I can determine if I should continue pursuing the idea.
You're probably going to see a lot...and I mean a lot of grammatical errors. I'm not too worried about those at the moment, because I can always find a few good editors to polish it up. It's the meat of the story I'm mostly worried about. No point in roasting a turkey to perfection if it's not even good turkey meat.
The simple truth is that authors like making people squirm. If this weren't the case, all novels would be filled completely with cute bunnies having birthday parties. — Brandon Sanderson, Alcatraz Versus the Evil Librarians
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