Hello Hello, I do not know how active this thread is, but I was wondering If I could get some feedback I would appreciate it. Just as a warning, it does have some strong language. Thank you.
Hi, Key. I'm requesting another review because I love your reviews. I started a novel and have been posting first drafts on YWS to help with the revision process. It would be great if you could check out the most recent chapter I have posted. (dw it's only chapter 4) Also, I would totally understand if you don't want to go through all the other chapters just to look at chapter four. If that's the case, I can give you a small summary of the previous chapters if you so choose. (but I might also ask you for reviews on later chapters if you're willing :eyes:) Here's chapter 1 and here's chapter 4
Hi @Moonlily ! Apologies for not getting to review your poem yet — are you still wanting feedback? ^^
@avianwings47 Hi ! Give me a tag if I haven’t gotten to your first chapter in a week or two — I’m happy to give a review but I am pretty busy currently xD so please don’t mind a brief wait!
name: key/string/perks pronouns: she/her/hers and they/them/theirs
novel: the clocktower (camp nano apr 24) poetry: the beauty of the untold (napo 2024)
keystrings wrote:Hey @TheRebel2007 ! This sounds cool -- I'll start with chapter one this week. ^^
Hey, Key, remember me? Guess what? I just dropped a new chapter of Nine a few days back. Would you like to review it along with the other ones? Thanks in advance! :p
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