i'm not too good at critiques...
when i read it, i felt what you where expressing and i really like how you compared nature with love..funny how they're kind of related somehow eh? overall i think its a great story..you really ''suck in'' the person who's reading it and i love the way it ends, its genius it ''wraps'' the story up..u know what i mean?
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