This is just something I came up with and wanted to know what ya'll thought. Critiques are needed! Writergirl
P.S. This is not finish. I just wanted insight before I continued.
Catalina looked up at the young man beside her. His grey eyes held wisdom far beyond his seventeen years. His blond hair moved with the wind as if it had a life of its own. Catalina realized for the first time that Caden had become more than a childhood friend. Whenever he turned those eyes onto her, her knees went weak and she could swear that her heart stopped beating. She forced herself to concentrate on what he was telling her.
“Now, hunting is a very delicate sport. And, as you know, one that is dear to my heart. I only agreed to bring you along because you promised you wouldn’t be any trouble.”
Catalina rushed to assure him. “No trouble at all. You won’t even know I’m here.”
Caden laughed quietly so as not to spook his horse, Ajax. “It’s kind of hard to forget.” His eyes roamed over her. “After all,” he continued, “You are my best friend. And,” he said seriously, “I did promise your father I would take care of you. The forest is a dangerous place. Always has been. But especially now that the Black Thieves have been hanging around and harming anyone who comes near these dark woods.” Here he gave her a stern glance.
Catalina sighed. He was always doing this. Just because he was two years older than her did not mean that she couldn’t take care of herself. On the contrary, Cat was an amazing fighter and held her own in most battles. Of course, she had never been to war, but she could still fight anyone who challenged her. “I thought we had been over this. I will be perfectly fine! So, stop stewing. That’s my father’s job remember!” Catalina said trying for a light tone. Caden smiled, but it didn’t get any farther than the corners of his mouth. Catalina peeled her eyes away from his worried ones and stared at the path in front of them, watching for any signs of approaching game. The scene was quite breath taking. It was fall, and all the leaves had already turned the familiar colors; red, gold, and yellow. The sun shone brightly upon the crystal clear stream running through the entire forest. Every animal around usually chose this stop to drink, which is why Caden had insisted that they would watch this spot.
She heard him heave a heavy sigh.
“You know I can’t help but worry about you, Cat. After all, I am like a brother to you. And doesn’t a brother have the right to worry?”
Cat felt her heart speed up. Brother! If you only knew! She forced herself to meet his steady gaze. She could have sworn that there was understanding in them. It’s just my imagination. I have longed for this to happen so much that I’m imaging things! “Of course you have the right to worry,” Cat answered. “I just wish you wouldn’t worry as much as you do. You know-“ Her words were cut off suddenly by the sound of horse hooves in the distance.“Be quieted!” Caden hissed. Cat instinctively reached for her bow and saw Caden do the same. As the horses came into view, Caden stiffened. Cat looked at him curiously. She knew that he had another life besides the one he shared with her, but she never questioned him about it. She focused back in on the loud raucous which was scaring away the best prize animals. The horses snorted impatiently while the two humans watched closely as two mysterious riders dismounted their black geldings and looked around them, as if searching for something. Cat was afraid to even breathe. She felt a light tap on her arm and turned her head slightly to see what Caden wanted. He motioned for her to get on her horse. She finally acquiesced, knowing not what his fate may be. “Just go!” he mumbled. Cat jumped on her horse and spurred it into a gallop, heading back to the Lone Wolf Inn.
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