this is a little excerpt that a girl friend of mine had me write. i don't write romance stuff so i don't know if its good or not.
Outside, the cold December air, mixed with a wet snow, crashed against the window. She sat in a faded leather wingback chair, listening as he tramped about, a thin wall being the only thing separating them. She sat up with anticipation as he neared the creaky door. His silhouette encompassed the cloudy glass panes on the door, blotting out the words H&S Agency.
Over the edge with excitement, she leapt toward him as the door opened. Wrapped in his arms, she leaned against him, her head buried against his chest, for what seemed like an eternity. Finally, their tight embrace ended. She peered through the dim light, up at his face. In place of his usual steady gaze, that she had grown so fond of; was a mischievous look of passion.
Not knowing what to do, she took a step back. In turn, he took a step towards her. Then he reached out his arm and touched her face. Her heartbeat quickened as he muttered a suggestive remark.
“Are you going to kiss me?” Her voice sounded foreign to her.
He only smiled as he took her face in both of his hands. But suddenly he swiped the glasses from her face and clasped them behind his back. She quickly overcame the shock and began to pursue her glasses. The two playfully tussled for a few minutes until he had her backed to the wall.
He pressed in close until his nose was practically touching hers. She could finally see him clearly; for she was plagued with a terrible case of nearsightedness. Their breathing was rather heavy as they stood staring into each others eyes. After a moment, he slipped his hand into hers, the glasses between their palms.
“I love you.” He said with a gleeful sigh.
He then kissed her, their arms wrapped passionately around each other. And for that moment, their lips locked in an endless love, everything was as it should be.
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