Okay it's short. Very short. But please crit anyway. I will elaborate on it at some stage. * biggest puppy eyes*
She smiled. A fleeting memory had crossed the netherregions of her mind; and she had allowed herself to smile a minute little grin, which lit up her eyes and transformed her usually solemn face.
Will stared. She had never seemed so beautiful; so alive. She struggled daily to hide her emotions. Why? This question had puzzled Will for an age, until he finally realised that by hiding her happiness, the little daily joys that we all experience, she was trying to escape from the sadness and “bad things” in her life. She was searching for a safe, uncomplicated life.
And yet in this fleeting moment she had revealed her true self: a soul so innocent that it believed that it could pass through life unscathed by the trials which we all,one day, must face. Will was mesmerised. And then the smile disappeared, as quick as it had come , remaining only as a fleeting memory in his mind.
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