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Lily sat alone, in the dark, confused and lost. The moonlight filtered through the curtains casting shadows across the room. Enchanting her, beckoning her to escape, feel the magic. Yet her heart couldn’t let go, wouldn’t let go of what she had once had. She was like a child refusing to ride the slide down to the fun fair. The creaking of the house around her reminded her that she was still really there, this feeling was real. The objects around her were solid and cold, they told her that she hadn’t disappeared; she wasn’t a ghost. She thought it was over, she had thought she’d moved on, there had been a cloud that was once covering the sun, hiding the light. But now it had moved and she could see clearly, she thought it would be a bright, sunny day but now she could see clearly she realised what she had really lost.
His heart had shifted; his route had changed, so why couldn’t she bring herself to change lanes too. He’d fallen for another, why wasn’t she happy for him? Why did she feel as though a bus was smashing into her over and over again? Why wasn’t this discovery a good thing? She had wished him the best, done what was right, kept her chin up. Then why did she feel like this? The discovery of his happiness had brought a dull ache to her chest, a slow pounding that refused to subside. She looked at the photos scattered across the floor, the perfect sign that this whole situation was a flicker of false hope, and a cliché. What was she thinking? Tucking a long curl of hair behind her delicate ear she picked out one of the photos, memories raced across her mind, blinding her with colour and sound, smell and taste.
Then she remembered how it had ended, why she now wanted to move on. His reason for cutting their tie was a weakness in character; in fact it hadn’t even given her a valid reason. He wasn’t strong enough to give her the real reason. Why was it she hadn’t heard it from him? She had been told by the people around her. He had been pathetic enough to tell others but not Lily, she had discovered the truth by accident. Why was that? None of it mattered now though; she was the one who still had a bright, unblemished future. She didn’t need him anymore; she was a strong, lone Lily, growing into a tall and graceful beauty of nature. She smiled; the first blossom of spring had bloomed. They had had their time, now it was her time, her time to shine. Now she controlled the weather, and the sun was shining brighter than ever.
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