Hi there!
Wow...that's all I can say right now. I'm such in awe by how good this story is. Here I thought that the main character was going to go beat up this crapy boyfriend and saved the day, but the complete opposite happened! You did a great job leading up to the end, not giving many hints as to what was going to happen. That way, by the end of the story your reader would be utterly suprised, like me. I didn't see and grammer or spelling errors so you're good there. The emotion you put into this was great.
Overall this is a great, amazing story. Keep writing!
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