First short story ever, hope you like it! ^__^
"I know how serious you were about Alex, Kayla, but it's seriously better if you just forget him. He's not worth it. Tell you what; let's go to that new club in town and get that jerk off your mind, alright?" My best friend Amanda suggested.
I nodded, feeling defeated as I wiped away my tears. Forgetting that 'jerk' who dumped me yesterday, which by the way was a day before my twenty-second birthday, would be great. Getting drunk would be even better, because I'm sure I wouldn't be able to forget him. I changed into a plain, halter topped black mini-dress and put on my four inch black platform stilettos. I Looked into the mirror after doing my make up and hair. I smiled, I looked hot. Even he would be jealous. "Let's go, let's go! We still got to meet-" Amanda stopped short and changed her story "There's going to be a huge line!"
"That dress looks amazing on you!" I replied as she walked away in her strapless white dress that showed off her every curve, not realizing her slip up in words.
"Hey!" I said, surprised to see my other best friend, Carly, and her boyfriend Ben.
"Surprise!" Carly exclaimed, her gorgeous, dark brown eyes sparkling with excitement, "Happy birthday!"
I laughed, "I totally wasn't expecting you! Did you plan this Amanda?"
Amanda laughed, "Yup! I was scared I'd messed up earlier, but you didn't seem to notice."
I grinned and nodded, "Actually, I didn't. Are we ready to go party though?"
I felt a stab of pain as Carly and Ben walked in hand in hand. Normally Alex would have put his arm around my waist and never let me leave his side at a club. He's a jealous man. At least, he was.
Then I saw him. My friends and I were walking up to the door to get in. Just like in a movie, the wind blew his black, eyebrow length hair away from his oval shaped face. I saw his deep green eyes and, for some reason, the annoyance on his face. My breathing stopped, and my heart skipped beats several times. My friends knew the bouncer, so they got V.I.P treatment. “Kayla, hurry up!” Carly called. I realized I’d been starring. I ran to catch up with them, flushing with embarrassment and hoping he hadn’t noticed. I looked back at the tall, semi-muscular man, who had just stopped with a pretty girl. He looked at me, and I felt butterflies in my stomach. I smiled shyly, and he returned it softly, then he looked back at the girl who he was talking to. I turned away, suddenly not wanting to get drunk or party. I wanted to find myself in his arms. It happened in a second.
I sighed, not wanting to go to the new club; it was, well, new. That meant a lot of people were going to be there and there’d be a huge line to get in. Too bad it was my best friend’s, Caleb’s, twenty-first birthday and he wanted to go there. Also too bad Karina was also going to be there. Karina is Caleb’s stunning, annoying, blond sister that just loved my body. Everyone knew how serious she was about getting in bed with me. I tried my best to get rid of her, but she just didn’t seem to get the hint. I wanted something serious, not just a one night stand. I even changed my hair back to black because she loved my dyed blond hair!
We were walking toward the bar when she approached me. I closed my deep green eyes, took a deep breath, and stopped to talk to her.
Then I saw her. She and her friends were just driving up to the club. Just like in a movie, her window was rolled down messing with her hair brown, waist length hair framing her heart shaped face. I swear her sky blue eyes were out of this world. My breathing stopped, and my heart skipped beats several times. “Take your time, Matt,” Caleb said, nodding towards his sister. I just nodded and turned my attention to Karina. I looked back towards the gorgeous girl just moments later, who was about to walk in. She was already looking at me, and I felt butterflies in my stomach. She smiled shyly, and I returned it softly. I turned my attention back to the matter at hand, suddenly not wanting to talk to Karina or party. I wanted to find myself in that girl’s arms. It happened in a second.
“Dude, that girl at the bar is super hot!” Caleb said to Matt nodding towards Kayla, who was at the bar. “Go for it!” Caleb exclaimed.
“Why don’t you?” Matt asked.
“Dude, really? Natasha would kill me!” Caleb replied.
“You guys got back together for what, the fifth time?” Matt asked, not really surprised they’d gotten back together.
Caleb shrugged, “Yeah well, it was just a misunderstanding!” He replied defensively.
Matt smiled, “Natasha’s a great girl. I’ll be right back!”
He walked towards the empty seat by Kayla, heart racing. He sat down and ordered a martini, then snuck a look at her. She looked at him and instinctively he looked away. He dared another look after what seemed like forever, and found her looking at him. They both smiled shyly and looked away. Finally he spoke, “Can I buy you a drink?”
She nodded with a soft smile, “I’d like that.”
They didn’t get another one, but talked. Two hours later, everyone saw the two hottest people in the club walk out hand in hand and knew the relationship they had was something else. It was obvious they wanted to talk, to get to know each other, to just be with each other. It happened in a second.
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