Whenever prose features I am inclined to read it, and for the most part I wonder why it is featured at all. This vignette, if I can call it that, is pretty damn cliché isn't it? Stock fall of worn lines and the same old fluff common to work of this nature. Rather predictable and trite, too. I do see why this featured though, it is well written and it is short, and that is usually enough. There is something at the heart of it, though it is rather watered down. Something almost mute, seems to resound, but I doubt I will lose sleep over it. It's a sweet little romp, then we move on.
But, like I said, the writing is decent. I must commend you on that at least.
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