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Sure there’s lights and a tree
We went thereabouta few weeks ago.
I have been trying to get a job, but since it’s nearing Christmas, no one was hiring.
I couldn’t tell him that there wasn’t going to be a presents under the tree for them.
I couldn't’t tell them that we can’t go home for Christmas
Just thinking about it was just eating me alive.
I meanafter all miraculous thing can happen on Christmas.
it would be this...Jenny asked me “Why can’t we just go home?”
and all actions would be in parentheses, or brackets, and they would NOT, ever, be in first-person. It would be in the view of the director. (so third-person. ) With what you have for actions, I can't make a better version for, because there is no script variant on the actions you have portrayed. If you're serious about scripts, look up proper script format, and download a program called CeltX online. It helps with script format. Keep writing!JENNY:
Why can't we just go home?
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