Lol Really funny, I especially like Ron's first set of lines. Very creative and funny
Some Boys: Treat girls like a sweatshirt. It looks nice and it makes you look good. But when the sweatshirt changes they toss it on the floor. Other Boys: Treat girls like a human. They treat her with the respect they should get and love you no matter what happens.
This was hilarious! I can't believe I've never come across it before! I love the way you've managed to show characterisation even through rap and kept the characters true to themselves. I would have liked to see a bit of action from Hermionie or Malfoy though. Maybe even Filch... now that'd have been weird! Please keep writing! The world needs humour like this!
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