JabberHut wrote:4. I love this story! Despite all the flaws I found, I love what I have and want to make it better. I want to make more sense of it, and I am so grateful that I had the motivation to keep writing through the month.
HERE WE GO AGAIN!!
This has gotten such a major revamp in the last year. I still have holes to fill, but a LOT has been fleshed out better. Things make more sense, characters are more fleshed out, plot actually has reason and purpose to it. ...And Matthias gets his own PoV. It happened.
The title also needs to be changed because this no longer takes place in Germany. But I could also edit things so that it does. So I'm not really sure, but a German title makes no sense if German has nothing to do with the story now. XD But for my mind's sake, I'm keeping it as is!
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