Very good ^-^. I think a lot of us feel similarly about YWS (or have once before). I just have one complaint: too much description. It's like cutting a twig with a chainsaw when you could have just done it yourself. Like being forced to eat the whole Thanksgiving Turkey. Like putting 16 gigs of RAM in a computer. Like buying a 500 gig mp3 player and only listening to music on it. Like putting so many frozen dinners in your refrigerator that you can't shut the door. Like drinking a milkshake too fast and getting a brainfreeze.
Or, just like the paragraph above -_^. Haha, good job, and keep writing!
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