Today in creative writing we had to either make the reader like a child-killer or make them dislike a seemingly wonderful child; in other words, each character had to be more than just a child-killer, just a wonderful child. This is what I came up with. I'm thinking of expanding to it and making it a short story, but this is it for now. Comments are appreciated, as always.
My name is Kaitlin Lindberg, and I’m eight and a half. I love my mommy and daddy and America, and I hate terrorists. Daddy says we shouldn’t let other people in cuz they are all terrorists. Mommy says our family came from Germany before America, so why shouldn’t we let other people in? I don’t know who’s right. Sometimes when Daddy talks about terrorists or other people he uses bad words and I have to cover my ears or Mommy will send me to my room so I don’t hear them.
I get good grades and like all my teachers too. I have a lot of friends at school but I’m not friends with Margo because she’s weird. Everyone says so. She draws really good but I pretend I don’t think so because no one likes her. The other girls hate her because she has glasses and always reads. They sing four eyes Margo, four eyes Margo with her stupid books whenever she walks by in the hallway. Is four eyes a bad word like Daddy uses? He doesn’t say that one but Mommy says it’s bad to call people four eyes.
Sometimes Margo tries to sit with us at lunch, but we all sit really close together so she can’t fit. Not even a bug could fit! That’s how close we sit together. We don’t let Margo in like America shouldn’t let terrorists in, only Margo isn’t a terrorist. Plus on the playground at recess we run away from her until she cries. Then we laugh at her. I wonder if terrorists cry when we don’t let them in, but I don’t think so.
Sometimes I feel bad when we make Margo cry, but if I don’t laugh at her maybe nobody will like me either. So I just laugh anyway and say how weird she is.
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